7/12/2007 c5 SapphireEyes16
aww the white rose is such a sweet idea, and the poem fits as well, so update soon!
aww the white rose is such a sweet idea, and the poem fits as well, so update soon!
7/2/2007 c5 1Haybay smartie
oo! i like the white rose idea. and the line of a poem that came with it was perfect. definatly add more poetry in the chapters to come. poetry helps to put more feeling into the story. well... update soon!
oo! i like the white rose idea. and the line of a poem that came with it was perfect. definatly add more poetry in the chapters to come. poetry helps to put more feeling into the story. well... update soon!
6/27/2007 c5 4Whoaa Kayy
haha i dont think you did, it kinda goes with all families...they say that they dont like eachother but they love eachother anyway, mabye you did give something away...i'm not sure, your the one writing it! lol ok well update soon!
-Rad Like Whoaa.
haha i dont think you did, it kinda goes with all families...they say that they dont like eachother but they love eachother anyway, mabye you did give something away...i'm not sure, your the one writing it! lol ok well update soon!
-Rad Like Whoaa.
6/27/2007 c5 2mia5081
hehe, i think glade is going to get an interesting surprise when he finds out paul isn't really interested in...the same gender lol
update soon!
~mia
hehe, i think glade is going to get an interesting surprise when he finds out paul isn't really interested in...the same gender lol
update soon!
~mia
6/24/2007 c5 2SecretWhispers
If they are invited over for dinner, her life sucks even more. Great chapter! Update!
If they are invited over for dinner, her life sucks even more. Great chapter! Update!
6/23/2007 c5 2productioncity
'REALLY? What's his name? Where does he live? I NEED to find him! gives puppy dog eyes Please! Introduce us!'
ahah! Maybe I will introduce ^.* He's in denial.. but It's Okay! 'cause me and my friends are trying to show him the good side of liking guys.
'See? Isn't he so hot?'
'Oh my god, GAG!'
That's the progress so far, however. Thanks for updating and that is that! ^^ (His name is Matt, by the way.)
'REALLY? What's his name? Where does he live? I NEED to find him! gives puppy dog eyes Please! Introduce us!'
ahah! Maybe I will introduce ^.* He's in denial.. but It's Okay! 'cause me and my friends are trying to show him the good side of liking guys.
'See? Isn't he so hot?'
'Oh my god, GAG!'
That's the progress so far, however. Thanks for updating and that is that! ^^ (His name is Matt, by the way.)
6/23/2007 c5 Hidden Flowers
Your brother doesn't like girls? *nods skeptically* And exactly why not? Lack of time doesn't generally bother most boys. I love this! Update, please!
Your brother doesn't like girls? *nods skeptically* And exactly why not? Lack of time doesn't generally bother most boys. I love this! Update, please!
6/23/2007 c5 6ObliviousLady
Haha. I would fully support you if you decided to beat up your brother for that. How much older is your brother?
Anyways, what's going on with the white rose and the note? I'm really dying to know. It's just oh so sweet and mysterious. Lol. And Glade with his puppy dog eyes definitely sounds irresistable... But I can't wait for more Paul.
This chapter definitely leaves me wanting more, so update soon.
Haha. I would fully support you if you decided to beat up your brother for that. How much older is your brother?
Anyways, what's going on with the white rose and the note? I'm really dying to know. It's just oh so sweet and mysterious. Lol. And Glade with his puppy dog eyes definitely sounds irresistable... But I can't wait for more Paul.
This chapter definitely leaves me wanting more, so update soon.
6/23/2007 c5 1runningXwithXtheXwerewolves
I would die if I got a rose in my locker...I would actually freak out alittle...anyway...that dinner's going to be just a tad awkward. I liked the chapter! UPDATE SOON! :P
I would die if I got a rose in my locker...I would actually freak out alittle...anyway...that dinner's going to be just a tad awkward. I liked the chapter! UPDATE SOON! :P
6/23/2007 c5 13kstar129
hm...How old is your brother?Depending on how old he is,and the fact that this is a BOY we're talking about I find the whole girls take up too much time comment unbeleivable.And does he have a journal/Diary or whatever?If he does read it!It would be awesome!And try to keep stuff he can blackmail you with down to a minimum.Then blackmail him to the extreme!Anyway awesome story!Make more SOON!
hm...How old is your brother?Depending on how old he is,and the fact that this is a BOY we're talking about I find the whole girls take up too much time comment unbeleivable.And does he have a journal/Diary or whatever?If he does read it!It would be awesome!And try to keep stuff he can blackmail you with down to a minimum.Then blackmail him to the extreme!Anyway awesome story!Make more SOON!
6/16/2007 c4 SapphireEyes16
i really lyke ur story and i just luv neva's character(spillin harmful chemicals on her ex tht's just brilliant!) keep up the updates!
i really lyke ur story and i just luv neva's character(spillin harmful chemicals on her ex tht's just brilliant!) keep up the updates!
6/15/2007 c3 psychotic blake lover
Okay, so I don't think you have any errors here. Great job! :) Well, the plot's getting more interesting day by day. And now that Paul's here, everything's getting so much more fun. So good luck to your next chapters! :D
Okay, so I don't think you have any errors here. Great job! :) Well, the plot's getting more interesting day by day. And now that Paul's here, everything's getting so much more fun. So good luck to your next chapters! :D
6/15/2007 c2 psychotic blake lover
Glade, our other best friend, greeted, slinging one arm over each of out shoulders.
I think you've got a typo there. our instead of our. :)
Gladwyne. That's a really unique name. And I like it. Hahah. Oh, and he's gay? Or is he just making fun of himself?
‘Good morning kids!’ My Chemistry teacher exclaimed excitedly.
I think My should just be my. :)
AWW! Well, isn't that adorable! The main guy now enters the story officially! Woot! This was another great chapter. I think you're improving chapter by chapter. Your conversations are smooth and entertaining. Great job!
Glade, our other best friend, greeted, slinging one arm over each of out shoulders.
I think you've got a typo there. our instead of our. :)
Gladwyne. That's a really unique name. And I like it. Hahah. Oh, and he's gay? Or is he just making fun of himself?
‘Good morning kids!’ My Chemistry teacher exclaimed excitedly.
I think My should just be my. :)
AWW! Well, isn't that adorable! The main guy now enters the story officially! Woot! This was another great chapter. I think you're improving chapter by chapter. Your conversations are smooth and entertaining. Great job!