
6/8/2007 c1
38CarpeDiem28
Awesome poem once again! Man, you weren't kidding when you said you wrote about real things. Whoa, you really dig in there and pull it out all the way. Keep writing.

Awesome poem once again! Man, you weren't kidding when you said you wrote about real things. Whoa, you really dig in there and pull it out all the way. Keep writing.
6/7/2007 c1
11Jiayin
Yeah, the plague is very interesting. In fact I once did a whole project on it, it got a high mark too. I love the poem!

Yeah, the plague is very interesting. In fact I once did a whole project on it, it got a high mark too. I love the poem!
6/6/2007 c1
1Cella Dura
Dude this is ever so totally awsome man! or whish ever you are dude or dudeet. this is a narley poem! It totally rocks!

Dude this is ever so totally awsome man! or whish ever you are dude or dudeet. this is a narley poem! It totally rocks!
6/6/2007 c1 lymli
it's a raw poem. I like the first lines: "The nausea isn’t so bad today. It’s seemed to settle down" very good.
it's a raw poem. I like the first lines: "The nausea isn’t so bad today. It’s seemed to settle down" very good.
6/6/2007 c1
51instant bliss
"With / All / This / Willful / Neglect". Good poem. The formatting really gives it an edge.

"With / All / This / Willful / Neglect". Good poem. The formatting really gives it an edge.