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7/16/2007 c5 19ihrtbks
Intense. Especially the end. But she can't like Damien that way because he has Melissa and she's supposed to like Tyler! Or maybe she can, but then realize Dam doesn't like her that way and Tyler does. Just suggestions from an eager reader.

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7/10/2007 c4 ihrtbks
Ooh, I like Tyler. He's an interesting character.

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6/11/2007 c3 ihrtbks
Interesting. I like how you develop your characters. But I'm a little confused with Damien's family. His sister is Tara; his brother-in-law is Carter; his niece is Carrie, right? Then why do Carrie's eyes look like Liz's?

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