
6/12/2007 c1
11xDancingintheRainx
The imagery is lovely. Its a thought provoking piece and very intriguing. When I first read it, I thought about a really old person reaching out for something just out of his grasp. I don't know where that came from. X) Great work, as always.

The imagery is lovely. Its a thought provoking piece and very intriguing. When I first read it, I thought about a really old person reaching out for something just out of his grasp. I don't know where that came from. X) Great work, as always.
6/12/2007 c1
69Professional Dreamer
WOW. So much story and depth and intrigue purely by leaving it all out. :) That is genius.

WOW. So much story and depth and intrigue purely by leaving it all out. :) That is genius.
6/11/2007 c1
6Indie Tangles
i won't. :)
i do like its rythm, even if i don't quite get the subject matter.

i won't. :)
i do like its rythm, even if i don't quite get the subject matter.