for My Saving Grace10/15/2011 c1 Guest
Awesome
Awesome
5/26/2010 c1 
114OspreyEagle
This is beautiful! I love the imagery...
p.s. I found at the Linnie forum! Hehe.
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114OspreyEagleThis is beautiful! I love the imagery...
p.s. I found at the Linnie forum! Hehe.
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6/7/2007 c1 The Postscript
Really beautiful, vivid imagery. I've hit a rough spot with religion, and yet your words manage to have the emotion that can still reach me in certian reflection. I love the format of the whole piece, but the two most striking lines, to me, were "Your love the water/Your blood the soap" because it is the connecting point of the whole poem. Wonderful write. Keep writing, k.
Really beautiful, vivid imagery. I've hit a rough spot with religion, and yet your words manage to have the emotion that can still reach me in certian reflection. I love the format of the whole piece, but the two most striking lines, to me, were "Your love the water/Your blood the soap" because it is the connecting point of the whole poem. Wonderful write. Keep writing, k.
6/6/2007 c1 M. Williams
I liked it. There are a few too many anti-religious works on this site (heh, even though I s'pose I'm sort-of guilty), and not enough of works like this. Good job. :)
I liked it. There are a few too many anti-religious works on this site (heh, even though I s'pose I'm sort-of guilty), and not enough of works like this. Good job. :)