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4Nyx'sReincarnation
This was such an amazing story! I love the unique romance especially. I'm actually writing a story for camp NaNoWriMo that's similar to this. The characters and plots aren't very similar, but the part about people having powers is. That's what intrigued me originally. I'm glad there's someone else out there who enjoys this kind of story as well.
I enjoyed your characters, especially Talor. She reminds me of a more fleshed out version of Rosalie from Twilight. Your grammar is pretty good as well, though you could use a little work in making sentences more concise.
Keep up the amazing work! :)
Tarah xXx
4Nyx'sReincarnationThis was such an amazing story! I love the unique romance especially. I'm actually writing a story for camp NaNoWriMo that's similar to this. The characters and plots aren't very similar, but the part about people having powers is. That's what intrigued me originally. I'm glad there's someone else out there who enjoys this kind of story as well.
I enjoyed your characters, especially Talor. She reminds me of a more fleshed out version of Rosalie from Twilight. Your grammar is pretty good as well, though you could use a little work in making sentences more concise.
Keep up the amazing work! :)
Tarah xXx
9/12/2013 c1 16audacityofmymind
I really like it.
Usually I find supernatural stories of this kind cliche and predictable but I really liked the way you balanced things. There was romance and suspense and action, just the right amount.
To be honest, I kind of shipped Jason and Casey, even though I totally knew Donovan would turn out to be a good person in the end. Nevertheless, I expected to see a little more of the real Donovan, and a bit more interaction between him and Casey.
There are a lot of things I could say, but to sum it up, I really enjoyed the story and your style. I hope you write a sequel or a one shot, I would definitely read it.
Great job!
16audacityofmymindI really like it.
Usually I find supernatural stories of this kind cliche and predictable but I really liked the way you balanced things. There was romance and suspense and action, just the right amount.
To be honest, I kind of shipped Jason and Casey, even though I totally knew Donovan would turn out to be a good person in the end. Nevertheless, I expected to see a little more of the real Donovan, and a bit more interaction between him and Casey.
There are a lot of things I could say, but to sum it up, I really enjoyed the story and your style. I hope you write a sequel or a one shot, I would definitely read it.
Great job!
3/21/2013 c4 Guest
Okay. I'd totally want to make out with the villain too. Seriously. Hot villains are awesome.
Okay. I'd totally want to make out with the villain too. Seriously. Hot villains are awesome.
7/10/2011 c15 1Creatures
oh nom nom nom :D
Good work, this story was awesome! I am glad I had the pleasure to read it :)
1Creaturesoh nom nom nom :D
Good work, this story was awesome! I am glad I had the pleasure to read it :)
1/15/2010 c15 She Who Loves Pineapples
Aw!
That was great!
Defintely one of the better stories here I've read.
I liked some of the twists at the end, all though some (like Donovan using mind control) were a bit predictable.
But seriously, it was good.
I'd like to see this made into a series.
Aw!
That was great!
Defintely one of the better stories here I've read.
I liked some of the twists at the end, all though some (like Donovan using mind control) were a bit predictable.
But seriously, it was good.
I'd like to see this made into a series.
12/29/2009 c15 arabee
this was an awesome story :)
i'm a casey/jason shipper though, so i was kind of rooting for that but the ending was still really good!
thanks for the great read and keep it up!
xx
arabee
this was an awesome story :)
i'm a casey/jason shipper though, so i was kind of rooting for that but the ending was still really good!
thanks for the great read and keep it up!
xx
arabee
11/23/2009 c7 She Who Loves Pineapples
...suspensful now. I really like that twist about how Mike was "forced" to attack Casey...
...suspensful now. I really like that twist about how Mike was "forced" to attack Casey...
11/6/2009 c1 She Who Loves Pineapples
...I finally got around to starting to read the remake... yeah...
Good start...
...I finally got around to starting to read the remake... yeah...
Good start...
6/18/2009 c10 96Silly Little Storywriter
It pains me to write this review. I like your other work.
The Executioners was a reat story. HOWEVER, Casey is so stupid and dense. Did you mean to write her as such a... a hate to say it, but a Mary Sue?
It's a shame, because she started out fairly cool.
I'm gonna keep reading, I just hope she stops being a... well... a moron.
I'm sorry. I just felt like I had to be honest.
Feel free to rip the shit of me, if you wish.
Brenna
96Silly Little StorywriterIt pains me to write this review. I like your other work.
The Executioners was a reat story. HOWEVER, Casey is so stupid and dense. Did you mean to write her as such a... a hate to say it, but a Mary Sue?
It's a shame, because she started out fairly cool.
I'm gonna keep reading, I just hope she stops being a... well... a moron.
I'm sorry. I just felt like I had to be honest.
Feel free to rip the shit of me, if you wish.
Brenna
4/28/2009 c15 10cherrypiesizzle
Whoa. That was so unexpected...lol this really does remind me of X files.
10cherrypiesizzleWhoa. That was so unexpected...lol this really does remind me of X files.
4/28/2009 c9 cherrypiesizzle
OH NO! I felt like swearing, but CRAP, Donovan is the mind-control guy. How can he just control her like that! "Forget about the sword" to Casey...does he even care about her? I don't know, I feel like his character is not that substantial, I read some other reviews on your story and they have said the same thing. If I had to say the character whom I felt was the most 'alive' I guess you could say, it would be Jason. He's like this ray of sunshine - in how realistic he feels- in this story.
OH NO! I felt like swearing, but CRAP, Donovan is the mind-control guy. How can he just control her like that! "Forget about the sword" to Casey...does he even care about her? I don't know, I feel like his character is not that substantial, I read some other reviews on your story and they have said the same thing. If I had to say the character whom I felt was the most 'alive' I guess you could say, it would be Jason. He's like this ray of sunshine - in how realistic he feels- in this story.