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8/24/2007 c1 asian-hime4000
I love how this flows.
8/23/2007 c1 Parilis
I really liked these Haiku's. Faves were "Smile" and "Those Lights of Yours".

With simple 5-7-5 you gave me much to thought about.

~Parilis.
6/27/2007 c1 31partingissuchsweetsorrow
Pretty good. I like it, and it does seem to have a deeper meaning.
6/20/2007 c6 14moonsliver86
I like the fact that you added that small nuance of the game being "petty" yet somewhat not as petty as one would think. Good haiku.
6/19/2007 c7 99night62611
this is really pretty, keep up the good work, i like them all actually
6/17/2007 c5 322Basara
good...

nice...
6/15/2007 c5 48Katja de Wit
Very nice new chapter. :) Nice choice of words. Keep it up.

~Katja
6/9/2007 c2 298Moon-Chaser
I get the feeling of things that are forbidden from this haiku. I like the way you write these.

keep it up.
6/9/2007 c1 Moon-Chaser
I like this one, I love haikus as well.

The last line made me think more, I feel the need to be in control a lot.

Keep it up.
6/9/2007 c1 48Katja de Wit
Very nice haiku. It really does feel like it has a deeper meaning to it. Just one thing: the way you sort of, went HTML-happy on the title doesn't really add anything...

~Katja
6/8/2007 c1 174a silenced revolution
I'd suggest removing the question mark from the first line and adding a period to the last line. Other than that, nice work.

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