for Satin Eyes and Sinful Hugs9/5/2007 c1 
612simpleplan13
You breathe vehement.. vehemently... unless it was a poetic license thing in which case nvrmind
I liked this a lot.. the descriptions were great and the ending was so sweet... I love the line about twirling the covers...
612simpleplan13You breathe vehement.. vehemently... unless it was a poetic license thing in which case nvrmind
I liked this a lot.. the descriptions were great and the ending was so sweet... I love the line about twirling the covers...
7/15/2007 c1 17life like whoa
you know what else was breathtaking?
this amazing talent you seem to have.
^_^
I loved this piece too.
17life like whoayou know what else was breathtaking?
this amazing talent you seem to have.
^_^
I loved this piece too.
6/9/2007 c1 49Toxic.Industrial.Waste
I absolutely love your your lustful poems! It's like reading a hot steamy housewife romance/erotica novel! You make sex sound like a dance.
Beautiful.
49Toxic.Industrial.WasteI absolutely love your your lustful poems! It's like reading a hot steamy housewife romance/erotica novel! You make sex sound like a dance.
Beautiful.
6/8/2007 c1 70continuous brevity
ohh, wow. this was quite beautiful. lovely descriptions here! nice work.
70continuous brevityohh, wow. this was quite beautiful. lovely descriptions here! nice work.