for Rose Colored Glasses7/11/2012 c1 Guest
I like the way the story is going, but do there have to be so many curse words in it? I understand some people curse, but not all.
I like the way the story is going, but do there have to be so many curse words in it? I understand some people curse, but not all.
6/5/2008 c2 danielle
holy shit monkeys this is great. please continue i really like reading it
holy shit monkeys this is great. please continue i really like reading it
7/10/2007 c2 Sam
I absolutely am liking this story. Tripp is a trip, haha, okay I'm not funny but whatever and I like Winnie's quirkiness. I like how Winnie is annoying Tripp and that they are both insanely different. In this sentence you wrote, "Back in Dallas, he was the ticket to Mac." I think you mean "Back in Detroit..." I am not picky when it comes to grammar, but I like consistency in characters, place, names, ages, character descriptions, etc. I'm annoying hah. I hope you update this story soon. Thanks.
I absolutely am liking this story. Tripp is a trip, haha, okay I'm not funny but whatever and I like Winnie's quirkiness. I like how Winnie is annoying Tripp and that they are both insanely different. In this sentence you wrote, "Back in Dallas, he was the ticket to Mac." I think you mean "Back in Detroit..." I am not picky when it comes to grammar, but I like consistency in characters, place, names, ages, character descriptions, etc. I'm annoying hah. I hope you update this story soon. Thanks.
7/3/2007 c2 
9TheFallenHeroine
Awesome!
I love your style of writing.
Keep writing, for each of your stories!
Love
TheFallenHeroine
X
9TheFallenHeroineAwesome!
I love your style of writing.
Keep writing, for each of your stories!
Love
TheFallenHeroine
X
6/28/2007 c2 6Carmel March
This is an absolutely wonderful story so far. I love the characters. You've made them so complex, so realistic. Good job on this, and I hope to read more soon!
~carm~
6Carmel MarchThis is an absolutely wonderful story so far. I love the characters. You've made them so complex, so realistic. Good job on this, and I hope to read more soon!
~carm~
6/18/2007 c2 Calico Dreams
I love Tripp.
It's official.
He's such a spaz.
But a good one.
And Winnie...
Something tells me there is more
to her than we see.
Can't wait to find out more.
Update!
Rin
I love Tripp.
It's official.
He's such a spaz.
But a good one.
And Winnie...
Something tells me there is more
to her than we see.
Can't wait to find out more.
Update!
Rin
6/18/2007 c1 Calico Dreams
I like it alot.
Winnie seems awesomely bizarre.
And I like the fact that you didn't make Tripp
this perfect little boy.
I mean, he has flaws.
Which is what makes the story so real.
Definitely continue this one ^^
And keep up the good work
Rin
I like it alot.
Winnie seems awesomely bizarre.
And I like the fact that you didn't make Tripp
this perfect little boy.
I mean, he has flaws.
Which is what makes the story so real.
Definitely continue this one ^^
And keep up the good work
Rin
6/16/2007 c2 anon
can't wait for all the drama to start, really interested in seeing how this one turns out. keep up the good work!
can't wait for all the drama to start, really interested in seeing how this one turns out. keep up the good work!
6/14/2007 c1 Dezi
I reallyl ike this story so far. Much different from what i usually read, and amusing. Keep it up.
I reallyl ike this story so far. Much different from what i usually read, and amusing. Keep it up.
6/13/2007 c2 8somuchformyhappyending
lol...Winnie is just absolutely hilarious. and I actually like Tripp. He reminds me of my brother. who I don't like. but I like Tripp. I still don't know why. anyways...update this soon! I love it so far!
bec
8somuchformyhappyendinglol...Winnie is just absolutely hilarious. and I actually like Tripp. He reminds me of my brother. who I don't like. but I like Tripp. I still don't know why. anyways...update this soon! I love it so far!
bec
6/12/2007 c2 Stoker
God, I really love Winnie. Tripp really is an asshole, but I kinda like him too. lol. Can't wait to read more. Still see Tripp as a less punky Tripp Underwood. It's a good visual. :)
God, I really love Winnie. Tripp really is an asshole, but I kinda like him too. lol. Can't wait to read more. Still see Tripp as a less punky Tripp Underwood. It's a good visual. :)
6/9/2007 c1 plastic figurine
I like it. So here is a review in reward. And I like reviews too if you know what I mean. I am so shallow :-P
I like it. So here is a review in reward. And I like reviews too if you know what I mean. I am so shallow :-P
6/9/2007 c1 somuchformyhappyending
I think its good. its also realisitic, since you know, he's thinking about Winnie being naked all the time. :) anyway, I think your characters are original and unique and I think this plot is good, so please continue!
bec
I think its good. its also realisitic, since you know, he's thinking about Winnie being naked all the time. :) anyway, I think your characters are original and unique and I think this plot is good, so please continue!
bec
6/8/2007 c1 Stoker
I was just about to go out onto my roof when I got this email. I am putting Tripp Underwood in as a visual even though he doesn't quite fit the role. It's the only Tripp I can come up with. Great start! I like the girl in this. She seems refreshingly odd. In a good way. Woo for clown berate-ment. I'm a word making machine tonight.
I was just about to go out onto my roof when I got this email. I am putting Tripp Underwood in as a visual even though he doesn't quite fit the role. It's the only Tripp I can come up with. Great start! I like the girl in this. She seems refreshingly odd. In a good way. Woo for clown berate-ment. I'm a word making machine tonight.