for Things I'll Never Say6/16/2007 c1 
40DemonicTruths
Great poem. I love how you put the italics. It adds to the poem a lot. Keep writing.
-DemonicTruths
40DemonicTruthsGreat poem. I love how you put the italics. It adds to the poem a lot. Keep writing.
-DemonicTruths
6/10/2007 c1 8eldritch efflorescence
I enjoyed this. You did a good job of telling how the narrator does on thing, but thinks another. Well written.
8eldritch efflorescenceI enjoyed this. You did a good job of telling how the narrator does on thing, but thinks another. Well written.