for State Of Irony4/27/2016 c32 Guest
Please finish this story. It s so close I've been following it since the beginning it's that's good
Please finish this story. It s so close I've been following it since the beginning it's that's good
11/4/2015 c27 crazydaisyyy
is it me or are UR chapters getting better and better? sad how it's all coming to an end soon :(
is it me or are UR chapters getting better and better? sad how it's all coming to an end soon :(
1/20/2015 c18 TheLike
Oh man it's been so long since I've read this story, I hope you finish it one day!
Oh man it's been so long since I've read this story, I hope you finish it one day!
5/28/2014 c32 Guest
Your story shouldn't be rated M . Nothing in it for Mature audience . Should be rated T change your ratings for your story
Your story shouldn't be rated M . Nothing in it for Mature audience . Should be rated T change your ratings for your story
5/28/2014 c20 Guest
The revenge to jermey was boring . He deserved worst . Atempted rape is not something to take lightly and anyone who feels sorry for him is crazy he got off easy . And Jesse saying she ruined his life and felt sorry ... Um he would of ruined her life if Acher didn't intervene . So I felt her remorse was bullshit . That's my only dislike in the story
The revenge to jermey was boring . He deserved worst . Atempted rape is not something to take lightly and anyone who feels sorry for him is crazy he got off easy . And Jesse saying she ruined his life and felt sorry ... Um he would of ruined her life if Acher didn't intervene . So I felt her remorse was bullshit . That's my only dislike in the story
1/2/2013 c32 
3Chelsea Grin
Wow you updated! You were gone for so long I was totally missing this story! (: I've always loved your characters, they're so surprising, real, interesting, and the way you tell this story is simply awesome! I hope you keep writing!
3Chelsea GrinWow you updated! You were gone for so long I was totally missing this story! (: I've always loved your characters, they're so surprising, real, interesting, and the way you tell this story is simply awesome! I hope you keep writing!
12/31/2012 c32 leavemeialone
So I read all of your chapters in this story so far. I love it! I don't what to say about this story but it is super awesome. I love the characters. I know you said in several author's note how people were criticizing you for your character's changes in sexuality. I don't what it is like to be her, but I do know how people can change. People change their minds all the time. People experiment. I think that is just part of how things are. It took her a while for her to understand . . . As for Seth and Jess I am so glad to see them together. The fact that they are best friends even makes it some much better because they truly know each other. He knows how she is . . . I love reading about the other guys too! I love Archibald in the beginning . . . then it all changed with Nora. Overall, I am so excited to have found this story. It is very enjoyable! I hope you update . . . give us a nice conclusion!
So I read all of your chapters in this story so far. I love it! I don't what to say about this story but it is super awesome. I love the characters. I know you said in several author's note how people were criticizing you for your character's changes in sexuality. I don't what it is like to be her, but I do know how people can change. People change their minds all the time. People experiment. I think that is just part of how things are. It took her a while for her to understand . . . As for Seth and Jess I am so glad to see them together. The fact that they are best friends even makes it some much better because they truly know each other. He knows how she is . . . I love reading about the other guys too! I love Archibald in the beginning . . . then it all changed with Nora. Overall, I am so excited to have found this story. It is very enjoyable! I hope you update . . . give us a nice conclusion!
12/31/2012 c12 wonderland212
From the summary at the start of chapter one, I was pretty interested in seeing how this would play out...the plot seemed so original. As I started reading I was I impressed with how well you've created the bond between the characters and how well developed each character is...plus the writing has a very effortless feel...almost like this is really happening and there is no way to tell how it will play out ( which is always a great quality in a story).
However, ( and maybe I'm just jumping to conclusions here since I'm only on ch12) it's starting to feel forced and a wee bit predictable. For instance, it doesn't take a genius to realize that you're setting it up for archer and Nora to get together or at the very least have a 'connection' of some sort...which will eliminate the whole awkward situation of archer being alone when Jesse chooses Seth...which is a little weird considering how young nora seems. Oh, and I'm sure that despite jesse's obvious feelings and actions, she's most likely going to deny, deny that she's gay while her and Seth tip-toe around their feelings for one another...I imagine them dragging this out quite a bit, with some Karma thrown in just to complicate things further,lol
Now I could be totally off base here,lol, but it went from being an original piece of fiction whose characters happen to be in high school struggling with real issues (i.e- sexuality, loss,et.), to the typical teenager-in love-with-her best friend cliche.
Now I'm not trying to offend of insinuate that all cliches are bad - I mean they r around for a reason, right?lol -, but they turn bad when it starts to 'feel' like you're reading the same old, same old. As I said before, you are obviously a skilled writer and I think that with the amazing characters that you've created and the unique plot, this story could've had real potential - in my opinion - of standing out from the typical romance. But once again, this is all just my take on it..I'm in no way the standard of good fiction,lol, or anything like that..and I honestly don't mean to offend. We all come on a site like this for feedback or insight, and it would be unjust if I didn't contribute my honest opinion:)
From the summary at the start of chapter one, I was pretty interested in seeing how this would play out...the plot seemed so original. As I started reading I was I impressed with how well you've created the bond between the characters and how well developed each character is...plus the writing has a very effortless feel...almost like this is really happening and there is no way to tell how it will play out ( which is always a great quality in a story).
However, ( and maybe I'm just jumping to conclusions here since I'm only on ch12) it's starting to feel forced and a wee bit predictable. For instance, it doesn't take a genius to realize that you're setting it up for archer and Nora to get together or at the very least have a 'connection' of some sort...which will eliminate the whole awkward situation of archer being alone when Jesse chooses Seth...which is a little weird considering how young nora seems. Oh, and I'm sure that despite jesse's obvious feelings and actions, she's most likely going to deny, deny that she's gay while her and Seth tip-toe around their feelings for one another...I imagine them dragging this out quite a bit, with some Karma thrown in just to complicate things further,lol
Now I could be totally off base here,lol, but it went from being an original piece of fiction whose characters happen to be in high school struggling with real issues (i.e- sexuality, loss,et.), to the typical teenager-in love-with-her best friend cliche.
Now I'm not trying to offend of insinuate that all cliches are bad - I mean they r around for a reason, right?lol -, but they turn bad when it starts to 'feel' like you're reading the same old, same old. As I said before, you are obviously a skilled writer and I think that with the amazing characters that you've created and the unique plot, this story could've had real potential - in my opinion - of standing out from the typical romance. But once again, this is all just my take on it..I'm in no way the standard of good fiction,lol, or anything like that..and I honestly don't mean to offend. We all come on a site like this for feedback or insight, and it would be unjust if I didn't contribute my honest opinion:)
8/30/2012 c31 HiddenInTheCrowd
PLEASE UPDATE! I dont know how my life will continue without knowing exactly who is in that bed! what a cliffhanger ):
PLEASE UPDATE! I dont know how my life will continue without knowing exactly who is in that bed! what a cliffhanger ):