for If I Let You In12/27/2007 c1 
3Molly Renaud
I really like the repetitiveness of this, it works very well.
Its heavy but at teh same time enlightening.
its hard to pull that off,
but you did it.
Good job.
-Molly
3Molly RenaudI really like the repetitiveness of this, it works very well.
Its heavy but at teh same time enlightening.
its hard to pull that off,
but you did it.
Good job.
-Molly
8/25/2007 c1 5The Dormouse
Oh darlin, that's beautiful! Such a lovely poem. I love it! It's so true, and so sad, and so perfect. loveley
5The DormouseOh darlin, that's beautiful! Such a lovely poem. I love it! It's so true, and so sad, and so perfect. loveley
7/18/2007 c1 332smile for the sunshine
Man, I've felt like that before. To a tee, I can relate. And yet, I can't say that the risk was worth it. At all. The ending stunk.
332smile for the sunshineMan, I've felt like that before. To a tee, I can relate. And yet, I can't say that the risk was worth it. At all. The ending stunk.
7/10/2007 c1 173Exodus.Escence Of Sin
i like it. very nice and lots of emotion. ^.^ good job
EvaneScence123
173Exodus.Escence Of Sini like it. very nice and lots of emotion. ^.^ good job
EvaneScence123
6/12/2007 c1 Cracked Mirror Image
omg...this is deffinitly my favorite of ur poems...DEFINITLY...however u spell that...anyways...i love it...write more...a.s.a.p.
omg...this is deffinitly my favorite of ur poems...DEFINITLY...however u spell that...anyways...i love it...write more...a.s.a.p.
6/11/2007 c1 47The Hawks Reject
This is really good!
You don't see many Chained Poems these days, Nice job!
Added to Favs!
-Chris-
47The Hawks RejectThis is really good!
You don't see many Chained Poems these days, Nice job!
Added to Favs!
-Chris-