for Girl, Boy and the World6/26/2008 c6 
1funnechick
I just started reading. And although I like Matt now, especially after finding out he didn't do something horrible to Alison that caused a breakup, I also really like Oliver. He's like a new and refreshing kind of person that, I think, Alison could get used to.
;)
I hope you'll be posting the next chapter soon.
1funnechickI just started reading. And although I like Matt now, especially after finding out he didn't do something horrible to Alison that caused a breakup, I also really like Oliver. He's like a new and refreshing kind of person that, I think, Alison could get used to.
;)
I hope you'll be posting the next chapter soon.
9/10/2007 c1 Essie
The summary sounds interesting. I haven't read it yet ... but I will. Getting older means memory loss so I'm gonna wait until more chapters are up and then invest memory cells to characters otherwise it's like Dory reincarnated within by brain. Hehe But keep posting.
The summary sounds interesting. I haven't read it yet ... but I will. Getting older means memory loss so I'm gonna wait until more chapters are up and then invest memory cells to characters otherwise it's like Dory reincarnated within by brain. Hehe But keep posting.
8/10/2007 c4 Pop the Bubble
yay!
an aussie story!
gah i am obsessed with woolworths
hahahahaah and priceline.
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yay!
an aussie story!
gah i am obsessed with woolworths
hahahahaah and priceline.
=] =] =] =]
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7/14/2007 c4 5thoughtsofwisdom
That was a vey nice civil conversation. Good strides in the right direction. I hope she decides to be friends with him, cause I need more brown haired dude.
5thoughtsofwisdomThat was a vey nice civil conversation. Good strides in the right direction. I hope she decides to be friends with him, cause I need more brown haired dude.
7/5/2007 c3 thoughtsofwisdom
I could never work in a day care center for snooty little children in designer clothes. Poor Allison. Please update soon, cause I hate filler chapters and I wanna see more of the ex.
I hope you did well on you exam
I could never work in a day care center for snooty little children in designer clothes. Poor Allison. Please update soon, cause I hate filler chapters and I wanna see more of the ex.
I hope you did well on you exam
7/5/2007 c3 xpressgirl
heyy!...im back and loving ur story!...i wanna know the deal with why she broke up with him!...anyways UPDATE! oh yea love how u added the facebook thing in the last chapter-so today!...not mnay ppl do it..
heyy!...im back and loving ur story!...i wanna know the deal with why she broke up with him!...anyways UPDATE! oh yea love how u added the facebook thing in the last chapter-so today!...not mnay ppl do it..
7/5/2007 c3 1D.G. Fievre
This is a lovely story so far, I like where you're going with it. I like the fact that you havent told you readers why Alison and Matt have broken up, just that the parents are upset. And although she's seems a bit standoffish (and with good reason, probably) Alison seems to still have feelings for Matt, so that should be interesting, as well as his father's upcoming birthday party.
You're grammar is great, and the glossary notes at the end was a great idea. There are only a couple of minor spelling errors that I saw, but nothing that takes away from the story itself. Overall, a great first three chapters! Cant wait to see more!
1D.G. FievreThis is a lovely story so far, I like where you're going with it. I like the fact that you havent told you readers why Alison and Matt have broken up, just that the parents are upset. And although she's seems a bit standoffish (and with good reason, probably) Alison seems to still have feelings for Matt, so that should be interesting, as well as his father's upcoming birthday party.
You're grammar is great, and the glossary notes at the end was a great idea. There are only a couple of minor spelling errors that I saw, but nothing that takes away from the story itself. Overall, a great first three chapters! Cant wait to see more!
6/29/2007 c2 5thoughtsofwisdom
So that was pretty awkward. I rally felt it for Alison. I've never had to have a conversation like that, but if I did, I think I'd have a heart attack. Hoping for more action next chapter.
5thoughtsofwisdomSo that was pretty awkward. I rally felt it for Alison. I've never had to have a conversation like that, but if I did, I think I'd have a heart attack. Hoping for more action next chapter.