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7/3/2007 c1 59The Jynx of Kari
Urm... i guess i could say that it was nicely written, that the lines ran smoothly, and that the ending was surprising. But i found it sudden.

_Kari
6/11/2007 c1 23HenneyBuggyBand
actually, this is pretty cool. you cna eb unhappy with something and it still be good.

i like the imagery and stuff. good job.

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