for World's Greatest Treasure9/19/2011 c48 
1Elizabeth Anne Blackberry
Thought that you might like to know that you have a repeating section in this chapter. I'll paste it below.
"You know, my mother may still be alive." Kylie said.
"Really? How do you know?" he asked.
"When she disappeared, so did her two dolphin escorts. She might still be with them somewhere in the world. Dolphins are reliable creatures, and strong. Their mission was to help save my mother, and protect her, and they would never return if they didn't first help her. They haven't returned yet though. But they will. I know it." Kylie said looking off into the ocean. Black Jack just looked at her in disbelief, and shrugged.
"I gotta take these to the kitchen." he said. "You want to come?"
"Sure." Kylie said, and the two of them went down to the kitchen together.
"Good."
"You know, my mother may still be alive." Kylie said.
"Really? How do you know?" he asked.
"When she disappeared, so did her two dolphin escorts. She might still be with them somewhere in the world. Dolphins are reliable creatures, and strong. Their mission was to help save my mother, and protect her, and they would never return if they didn't first help her. They haven't returned yet though. But they will. I know it." Kylie said looking off into the ocean. Black Jack just looked at her in disbelief, and shrugged.
"I gotta take these to the kitchen." he said. "You want to come?"
"Sure." Kylie said, and the two of them went down to the kitchen together.
When Kylie and Black Jack reached the kitchen, Black Jack set down the bag of potatoes on the floor in the corner, and then he sat down on a chair. He buried his head in his hands, and rubbed his hands over his head.
1Elizabeth Anne BlackberryThought that you might like to know that you have a repeating section in this chapter. I'll paste it below.
"You know, my mother may still be alive." Kylie said.
"Really? How do you know?" he asked.
"When she disappeared, so did her two dolphin escorts. She might still be with them somewhere in the world. Dolphins are reliable creatures, and strong. Their mission was to help save my mother, and protect her, and they would never return if they didn't first help her. They haven't returned yet though. But they will. I know it." Kylie said looking off into the ocean. Black Jack just looked at her in disbelief, and shrugged.
"I gotta take these to the kitchen." he said. "You want to come?"
"Sure." Kylie said, and the two of them went down to the kitchen together.
"Good."
"You know, my mother may still be alive." Kylie said.
"Really? How do you know?" he asked.
"When she disappeared, so did her two dolphin escorts. She might still be with them somewhere in the world. Dolphins are reliable creatures, and strong. Their mission was to help save my mother, and protect her, and they would never return if they didn't first help her. They haven't returned yet though. But they will. I know it." Kylie said looking off into the ocean. Black Jack just looked at her in disbelief, and shrugged.
"I gotta take these to the kitchen." he said. "You want to come?"
"Sure." Kylie said, and the two of them went down to the kitchen together.
When Kylie and Black Jack reached the kitchen, Black Jack set down the bag of potatoes on the floor in the corner, and then he sat down on a chair. He buried his head in his hands, and rubbed his hands over his head.
7/3/2007 c62 nolongeraround
That was a really good ending. I enjoyed it. I forgot about the seahorse honestly. I wish I had a seahorse.
Awesome story. I hope you write others.
That was a really good ending. I enjoyed it. I forgot about the seahorse honestly. I wish I had a seahorse.
Awesome story. I hope you write others.
7/3/2007 c61 nolongeraround
They are very supportive. That's nice. Oh my gosh, one more chapter left.
They are very supportive. That's nice. Oh my gosh, one more chapter left.
7/3/2007 c57 nolongeraround
'Captian-y' - That's all too funny. Heh, Maverick doesn't seem to like being useless.
'Captian-y' - That's all too funny. Heh, Maverick doesn't seem to like being useless.
7/3/2007 c53 nolongeraround
Man, that would be a painful cliff hanger if you hadn't posted the whole story.
Man, that would be a painful cliff hanger if you hadn't posted the whole story.
7/3/2007 c52 nolongeraround
Oh dear. Is it cruel that I laughed when Victor said they were going to sacrifice Maverick? Or when he said that they got caught.
Oh dear. Is it cruel that I laughed when Victor said they were going to sacrifice Maverick? Or when he said that they got caught.