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5/13/2008 c1 Hani
excellent.

Perfectly captures obsessive PERSON's selfishness ;)

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10/14/2007 c1 she smolders
Oh wow, I don't know what to say about this. There's something about it that made me want to read fast and find out how it ended but also made me try to read each line slowly and find a deeper meaning.

There's so much power and bitterness and lost hope in this. Good job.
6/12/2007 c1 Dianaartemis
I really like the lines "He was your idol,He was my fear." and there are other nice description. In the lines "I love you dearest,But you loved Cobain." I think 'love' should bepast tense...or the 'loved' should be present...just so it sounds a little neater...I like how as you read it, it kinda puts a picture together and its really interesting!

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