for This Is Not A Damned Poem10/4/2008 c1 Si-Sidera
Wow. Thank you for writing this. NO child is ever happier than when they dance in the rain, and you're right. I think we've all got so caught up finding 'true' love, and being with them forever. Finding the other half of your soul. I think we've forgotten about the other kind of love; the one where you already know that each person is beautiful on the inside, even if they don't show it. The one where you know you can say ' i love you' to a friend, and know you're not meaning it like 'that'. Lets just let it all go...
Wow. Thank you for writing this. NO child is ever happier than when they dance in the rain, and you're right. I think we've all got so caught up finding 'true' love, and being with them forever. Finding the other half of your soul. I think we've forgotten about the other kind of love; the one where you already know that each person is beautiful on the inside, even if they don't show it. The one where you know you can say ' i love you' to a friend, and know you're not meaning it like 'that'. Lets just let it all go...
5/10/2008 c1 
23fatbird33
i loved the message. the terrorist part was a little dramatic, but other than that it was a good piece.
23fatbird33i loved the message. the terrorist part was a little dramatic, but other than that it was a good piece.
6/15/2007 c1 13xtotallyatpeacex
Wow. This was thought-provoking, and to be honest that's a rare thing on fictionpress. I love the simplicity of it and the way that it's written. Hell, I just love it all. Lol. Great job. :D
13xtotallyatpeacexWow. This was thought-provoking, and to be honest that's a rare thing on fictionpress. I love the simplicity of it and the way that it's written. Hell, I just love it all. Lol. Great job. :D
6/13/2007 c1 25cat-tif
I really like this non-poem. Very truthful...It's got me thinking...which I like. Loving so much must be exhausting...I'd like to try that. I know I'm not being very eloquent, but I'm a bit overwhelmed. In a good way. Anyways, what I'm trying, quite ineffectively, so say is that I really liked this and that I love you too.
25cat-tifI really like this non-poem. Very truthful...It's got me thinking...which I like. Loving so much must be exhausting...I'd like to try that. I know I'm not being very eloquent, but I'm a bit overwhelmed. In a good way. Anyways, what I'm trying, quite ineffectively, so say is that I really liked this and that I love you too.