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2/24/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
I like this.. the ending is very sweet and not really expected by the title or the beginning.. I like how you go from seemingly bad to good..

A few things..

The storms my friend... did you mean the storm's my friend?

Alone, and distant, Once again... the Once being capital looked weird to me since it wasnt a new sentence...

Other than that it was a great piece... really well done...

PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon.. there's a link in my profile
8/25/2007 c1 33subliminalsquirrel
sweet, peaceful indeed

so excited to review your works finally!

"emptiness from the past" is interesting and "gentle breeze" is one of my favorite expressions I myself have used in the past (ha so I guess the past isn't really empty after all!)

keep writing

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