
6/21/2007 c1
173Exodus.Escence Of Sin
wow , that was actually pretty good^.^ i enjoyed the rythm to it. i lack some of that lol. great job
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wow , that was actually pretty good^.^ i enjoyed the rythm to it. i lack some of that lol. great job
~*evanescence123*~
6/15/2007 c1
3BardofArcadia
This one needs a review too. This one made me feel a little sad, but it is good when the reader starts to feel a certain emotien from your work. I like the bit about being an induvidual and I can only imagine what it must be like to loose a friend. Keep up the good work, you're a good writer.

This one needs a review too. This one made me feel a little sad, but it is good when the reader starts to feel a certain emotien from your work. I like the bit about being an induvidual and I can only imagine what it must be like to loose a friend. Keep up the good work, you're a good writer.