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4/4/2012 c1 87Nancy Mae
haha, bribery usually works. At least with me anyway lol. Good job with this poem. I liked it.

~KML92
7/23/2007 c1 13Shasta Valentine
intense.
6/15/2007 c1 15NekoKaji
Very sexy! ;) I like it. Although one thing that bugged me, which is both easily fixable and also one of my unfortunate pet-peeves, is that you missused "You're." Yes, I know, it's nit-picky of me to point out, but feel free to blame my OCD (Obsessive Compulsive Disorder). Hehe... -cough- IN ANY CASE... I hope you don't think I'm picking on you! I'm really not, I promise. I loved this, sincerely, and even though it's rather short (I SO wish it was longer!) it left me craving more, which is actually a good thing. Lovely imagery here. I really liked it. Nicely done!
6/15/2007 c1 2Just Max
Ah I know this feeling. Nicely written.
6/15/2007 c1 306Ashelin
"Our hearts beat faster,/Mesh together," I loved those lines. There is a bigger truth in it. Great job, I really liked it.

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