6/19/2007 c1 81Nick Weisman
i love your rhyming - its done very well.
this is clever and intriging.
I like it.
i love your rhyming - its done very well.
this is clever and intriging.
I like it.
6/18/2007 c1 hey maria
I don't know what to say about this, except that I really love it. [Added to favorites.]
I don't know what to say about this, except that I really love it. [Added to favorites.]
6/17/2007 c1 18Faerie Psyren
Strong, stunning poetry. Flesh it out and make it longer and you will have powerful piece.
Strong, stunning poetry. Flesh it out and make it longer and you will have powerful piece.
6/17/2007 c1 69Professional Dreamer
Wow. Beautiful.
"unseen strings for curled fingers
Pull the most where sadness lingers."
Too true.
Wow. Beautiful.
"unseen strings for curled fingers
Pull the most where sadness lingers."
Too true.