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7/13/2007 c2 DreamlessInfinity
UPDATE!

~Dreamless~
6/19/2007 c2 2SecretWhispers
Adrian is slightly stalker-ish but thats what makes him cool. Update soon!
6/19/2007 c2 not.a.spoiled.brat
ok.got it.its cuz from so much reading different stories on FB,i forget the names of the ppl.i should really start writing them in a notebook.well...i think u should really continue this story.i think adrian likes angie.well i think.please update soon.great chapter by the way.take care!
6/19/2007 c2 curator
LOL a funny second chapter. There was definitely a laugh at the end. The story's progressing rather nicely though, and your chapters are longer, lol. Update soon.
6/19/2007 c2 DreamlessInfinity
I like the storyline although the chapters are very short. I'd try adding in more detail, maybe what Blake is wearing?

~Dreamless_Infinity~
6/19/2007 c2 19ihrtbks
Yes, continue. Arrogance seems to be Adrian's main personality trait, but maybe that's how you wanted it. I like Blake. Angie...I like the fact that she's standing up to Adrian.
6/19/2007 c2 5The Green Crow
yea this is rele good. keep writing
6/19/2007 c1 The Green Crow
oh... sounds interesting. certainly got me interested.
6/18/2007 c1 fouetbea143
It's very short...but I'm interested in seeing what's next.
6/18/2007 c1 not.a.spoiled.brat
great chapter.i hope u update soon!that was cool.the part"

“I’m Adrian.”

She visibly rolled her eyes at this.

“And I’m not interested.”

that was cool.well please update soon.whats her name though?
6/18/2007 c1 curator
It didn't start of badly, though like said, it was a little short and didn't leave much room for story development or character understanding.
6/18/2007 c1 4039301
Great beginning. Update soon
6/17/2007 c1 A Quirky Tale
Interesting...
6/17/2007 c1 choppa173
I quite like this so far it will be interesting to see where it goes. Update soon please!

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