for Let Me Just Die8/16/2007 c1 D
Ick. I'm trying to read the meaning and see the feeling behind it, but the mess of the paragraph confuses me. Fix that out. Keep it simple. And maybe you'll be a good poet someday.
Ick. I'm trying to read the meaning and see the feeling behind it, but the mess of the paragraph confuses me. Fix that out. Keep it simple. And maybe you'll be a good poet someday.
6/18/2007 c1 
134whispered something profound
this is definitely something everyone who has ever loved has felt. good job!
134whispered something profoundthis is definitely something everyone who has ever loved has felt. good job!
6/18/2007 c1 173Exodus.Escence Of Sin
o lots of angst lol , i like this one, you kindof write like i do, thats kindof cool.you should check ou some of mine. well i loved the poem^.^
~*evanescence123*~
173Exodus.Escence Of Sino lots of angst lol , i like this one, you kindof write like i do, thats kindof cool.you should check ou some of mine. well i loved the poem^.^
~*evanescence123*~