for The Child6/22/2007 c1 Leo Bram
A very nice work on melancholy hopes and dreams...
You have your own style here, and it really shines through in your word usage. The dreamy discriptions that you use really give the overall work a very sad yet aquiescing vibe. All in all, I can't see any major flaws within this work.
-Ta-rah!
A very nice work on melancholy hopes and dreams...
You have your own style here, and it really shines through in your word usage. The dreamy discriptions that you use really give the overall work a very sad yet aquiescing vibe. All in all, I can't see any major flaws within this work.
-Ta-rah!