8/19/2007 c1 Christybell
"the moon has gone grey and the city's scarred the sky... speaking in greetings and crying in clay"
Its just gorgeous :)
I've got to write some more poetry...
"the moon has gone grey and the city's scarred the sky... speaking in greetings and crying in clay"
Its just gorgeous :)
I've got to write some more poetry...
6/21/2007 c1 15babybubbledragon
hey, i adored this, it was fantastic! favourite line is 'the moon has gone grey and the city's scarred the sky' x
hey, i adored this, it was fantastic! favourite line is 'the moon has gone grey and the city's scarred the sky' x
6/21/2007 c1 53AchtungBabyAchtung
'and we're all bereaved at the end of the day
speaking in greetings and crying in clay'
Oh! I love this ending! Almost as much as I love octavian :P
And i like the recurring refrain too, it works beautifully. xx
'and we're all bereaved at the end of the day
speaking in greetings and crying in clay'
Oh! I love this ending! Almost as much as I love octavian :P
And i like the recurring refrain too, it works beautifully. xx