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8/19/2007 c1 Christybell
"the moon has gone grey and the city's scarred the sky... speaking in greetings and crying in clay"

Its just gorgeous :)

I've got to write some more poetry...
6/21/2007 c1 15babybubbledragon
hey, i adored this, it was fantastic! favourite line is 'the moon has gone grey and the city's scarred the sky' x
6/21/2007 c1 53AchtungBabyAchtung
'and we're all bereaved at the end of the day

speaking in greetings and crying in clay'

Oh! I love this ending! Almost as much as I love octavian :P

And i like the recurring refrain too, it works beautifully. xx
6/19/2007 c1 5Perdix
the moon has gone grey and the city's scarred the sky- loved it

best bit of yours ive read, and thats saying somthing!

No tune is worthy of it.

Write some more soon! Lukie x

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