
6/20/2007 c1
134whispered something profound
I love the last two lines of this: "And the prospect of changing the world Is cast aside for diamonds and pearls" It's a good messege. And now I feel guilty for sitting here at my computer...

I love the last two lines of this: "And the prospect of changing the world Is cast aside for diamonds and pearls" It's a good messege. And now I feel guilty for sitting here at my computer...
6/20/2007 c1
4andthevineswillfollow
Pretty good. I don't know for some reason I really liked the line: "Soft-spoken devils and slimy smiles". That line drew me in.

Pretty good. I don't know for some reason I really liked the line: "Soft-spoken devils and slimy smiles". That line drew me in.