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6/20/2007 c1 134whispered something profound
This is so very depressing. But it's done in a strong way. I'm really not sure exactly what you're writing about, but you wrote it very strongly and I enjoyed this a lot. My favorite line was: "My neighbors are dead, so are the dogs, the tree and flowers are mourners" Mostly the part about the mourners being dead too. Is this poem just about apathy or the apathy shown to a certain subject? Abortion maybe? I'm sorry to be a bothersome ignoramous.

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