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8/8/2007 c1 12avriladdict
Hey.

I enjoyed this poem for its honesty. When I read it, I felt most intensely the dilemma you were going through. Just curious, but do you really feel that before you accepted the Lord, you were stuck in a sort of prison? Because to you, it may have been enlightening. But do good memories only emphasise the bad past?
6/21/2007 c1 81Nick Weisman
this is very very good. I like that you refer to the walls around your heart as a prison, and how the rain is sort of symbol for your strife and greif.

Great poem, good job.
6/20/2007 c1 10BrokenHeartedAngel
m...a little vauge but still very good! GOOD JOB!

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