Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for Always Loving You

8/29/2007 c1 9flashlitdarknessxx
wow...that was angsty...I LOVED IT! omg...great job!
8/29/2007 c1 lymli
the last lines were powerful, and the whole poem is so heartbroken.
6/28/2007 c1 12AuthorLittle
Very well written, I just don't like suicide stuff...yeah, that basically spoils all of Shakespeare's tragedies for me. Actually, I don't like Shakespeare's plays, they are full of good quotes, but as a whole I think they suck. Anyway, I noticed a typo in case you ever edit this:

"It drink to your name,"
6/21/2007 c1 15Jecori
ooh, meaningful and deep. angsty, but gets out the feelings perfectly. sounds quite drastic at the end. must have been really bad, then. i feel for the character.

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service