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1/25/2012 c1 flunkybubbleshorts
Hey, the story was nice.. punctuation marks would have helped though!
12/18/2007 c1 3WalkingUnnoticed
I really liked the story, but the lack of quotation marks really threw me off sometimes

~EmmaRose
12/9/2007 c1 CarnivalGirl346
And they lived happily ever after...

The End!
7/3/2007 c1 49Pinkamoo
Pretty good. Try adding some more full stops and commas, also you missed out on some "'s.
6/22/2007 c1 2codeblue92
aww.. that's sweet (: great story! keep it up!

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