for Ending It7/5/2007 c1 
173Exodus.Escence Of Sin
Hm... nice story. You must have alot of free time to be able to write as well as you have proven with this story i suppose. It's well written and not choppy at all. You seem to keep your mind open and embrace ideas right off the bat. Where did your inspiration for this story come from? It must have been great emotion. I'll add you to my favorites because i'd really like to chat more if that's ok with you of'course. Add me if you want to I guess. Great story once again!
evanescence123
173Exodus.Escence Of SinHm... nice story. You must have alot of free time to be able to write as well as you have proven with this story i suppose. It's well written and not choppy at all. You seem to keep your mind open and embrace ideas right off the bat. Where did your inspiration for this story come from? It must have been great emotion. I'll add you to my favorites because i'd really like to chat more if that's ok with you of'course. Add me if you want to I guess. Great story once again!
evanescence123
6/24/2007 c1 Hurting Soul
I like it, aufully depressing though. It has a few spelling mistakes and a little choppy but I like it.
I like it, aufully depressing though. It has a few spelling mistakes and a little choppy but I like it.
6/22/2007 c1 Cracked Mirror Image
*bawls*...u r so depressing...u know that right?...well...anyways...its written very well...there are a few spelling mistakes and grammatical gliches but...good...
gRaCe
*bawls*...u r so depressing...u know that right?...well...anyways...its written very well...there are a few spelling mistakes and grammatical gliches but...good...
gRaCe
6/21/2007 c1 47The Hawks Reject
I like it very depressing
A Little Spelling and Grammar and its good to go!
-Chris-
47The Hawks RejectI like it very depressing
A Little Spelling and Grammar and its good to go!
-Chris-
6/21/2007 c1 The Dead Italian
very imaginitive, (plz dont let that be your thoughts), and very good start for a book, idk, someone saves her, somethin like that and twilighty type story
very imaginitive, (plz dont let that be your thoughts), and very good start for a book, idk, someone saves her, somethin like that and twilighty type story