for if only6/25/2007 c1 
2sicklysnowwhite
oof. give it back, dammit! are there really people who have happy endings? i mean... like who? this was good
veryy good
so good, uh... it was good. yeah. verry good.
2sicklysnowwhiteoof. give it back, dammit! are there really people who have happy endings? i mean... like who? this was good
veryy good
so good, uh... it was good. yeah. verry good.
6/22/2007 c1 The Intelligent Designer
Well that was pretty bitchy...thanks a lot. It was great example of a leading up to then completely obliterating the idea kind of poem...great job!
One thing: End 2 lines should be "added an if only," not "a if only"
Well that was pretty bitchy...thanks a lot. It was great example of a leading up to then completely obliterating the idea kind of poem...great job!
One thing: End 2 lines should be "added an if only," not "a if only"