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6/25/2007 c1 2sicklysnowwhite
oof. give it back, dammit! are there really people who have happy endings? i mean... like who? this was good

veryy good

so good, uh... it was good. yeah. verry good.
6/22/2007 c1 The Intelligent Designer
Well that was pretty bitchy...thanks a lot. It was great example of a leading up to then completely obliterating the idea kind of poem...great job!

One thing: End 2 lines should be "added an if only," not "a if only"
6/21/2007 c1 306Ashelin
Ouch. That would hurt. That did hurt. That does hurt. Just horrible. Great poem. Keep it up.

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