
6/25/2007 c4 SuperCUTEJensen
great chapter...I like Jake more than Lance...I think Jake likes Bella..I cant wait to see what happens nexty... hope you update soon
great chapter...I like Jake more than Lance...I think Jake likes Bella..I cant wait to see what happens nexty... hope you update soon
6/24/2007 c4
1Alice Hartwell
Generally speaking, this is the exact opposite of the "normal" kind of story I go for. I'm all about the really lame romance and the characters that just -have- to be together, set in some tiny town with beautiful sunsets and happy bunnies.
Maybe a little less happy bunny and a little more sap-tastic lovin's.
Regardless of "the norm," I'm really loving this story. Like crazy. I feel compelled to read further just for the sake of the characters (I'm a huge fan of character development, by the way), because I genuinely want to know what's going to happen.
That's a great accomplishment on your part, 'cause I'm quite the picky customer, as it were.
Now, all that rambling aside, please do this little lady a favor and update soon. :) For all his dysfunctions and the "nothing more than friendly advice" chats he has with Iz (*cough*), I freakin' love Jake. Lance seems like a nice guy and all... but the irony kills me. I think we all know that he's not into Isabella 100%, now don't we?
Okay, I swear I'm done. Keep up the good work.
-ABH

Generally speaking, this is the exact opposite of the "normal" kind of story I go for. I'm all about the really lame romance and the characters that just -have- to be together, set in some tiny town with beautiful sunsets and happy bunnies.
Maybe a little less happy bunny and a little more sap-tastic lovin's.
Regardless of "the norm," I'm really loving this story. Like crazy. I feel compelled to read further just for the sake of the characters (I'm a huge fan of character development, by the way), because I genuinely want to know what's going to happen.
That's a great accomplishment on your part, 'cause I'm quite the picky customer, as it were.
Now, all that rambling aside, please do this little lady a favor and update soon. :) For all his dysfunctions and the "nothing more than friendly advice" chats he has with Iz (*cough*), I freakin' love Jake. Lance seems like a nice guy and all... but the irony kills me. I think we all know that he's not into Isabella 100%, now don't we?
Okay, I swear I'm done. Keep up the good work.
-ABH
6/24/2007 c4
1blondiexoxo
even tho they r friends i dont think she should have told her that it was the jake johnson. but it doesnt matter

even tho they r friends i dont think she should have told her that it was the jake johnson. but it doesnt matter
6/24/2007 c4
16Caught In A Simple Game
Another wonderful chapter. I just can't get off the edge of my seat with your stories!
Have a great birthday!

Another wonderful chapter. I just can't get off the edge of my seat with your stories!
Have a great birthday!
6/24/2007 c4
3Lady Wrye
Ahh, Jake is so right. Lance is just going to use her to make Krysti jealous...
Meh, poor silly girl...
Great chapter by the way ;)

Ahh, Jake is so right. Lance is just going to use her to make Krysti jealous...
Meh, poor silly girl...
Great chapter by the way ;)
6/24/2007 c4 mashaskripka
hey...i suck at writing reviews,... so with that said, i guess i just wanna say that this is a really great story idea...i like it :)
hey...i suck at writing reviews,... so with that said, i guess i just wanna say that this is a really great story idea...i like it :)
6/23/2007 c3
4J.D. Nichols
Love it! ^_^ Can't wait for the next update. Oh, and happy birthday! Have fun in Chicago!

Love it! ^_^ Can't wait for the next update. Oh, and happy birthday! Have fun in Chicago!
6/23/2007 c3
7BookWorm22202
Oh my god, I love this story! It's really awesome. I hope you have a super fun birthday in Chicago, but don't forget to update!
~BW2~

Oh my god, I love this story! It's really awesome. I hope you have a super fun birthday in Chicago, but don't forget to update!
~BW2~
6/23/2007 c3
3Lady Wrye
Lovely chapter here. She is so overly-obsessed with Lance. He's not even right for her. Obviously Jake is made for her. Haha. Can't wait till next chappie! :)

Lovely chapter here. She is so overly-obsessed with Lance. He's not even right for her. Obviously Jake is made for her. Haha. Can't wait till next chappie! :)
6/22/2007 c2 KayeJewett
Wow, that was fast. lol Loved this chappie. I like Jake; he's cool. ^_^ And Isabella's really funny. This is fun to read, so update again soon!
Wow, that was fast. lol Loved this chappie. I like Jake; he's cool. ^_^ And Isabella's really funny. This is fun to read, so update again soon!
6/22/2007 c2
16Caught In A Simple Game
Holy crap! I am, once again, completely captivated! Jake reminds me of a friend of mine who did the underground scene for awhile that I had the hots for - fits his description perfectly! Crazy. And I know what I said before about the realism in stories, but I think you prove your point with this one that unrealistic situations can be just as awesome. Looking forward to another great story!

Holy crap! I am, once again, completely captivated! Jake reminds me of a friend of mine who did the underground scene for awhile that I had the hots for - fits his description perfectly! Crazy. And I know what I said before about the realism in stories, but I think you prove your point with this one that unrealistic situations can be just as awesome. Looking forward to another great story!