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7/2/2007 c2 Emily
haha, Chapter Two definately made me laugh.

Isabella seems cool, but a real bitch! I mean, I wouldn't ever do that to my best friend. 'Cause if I would, then she really wouldn't be my best friend, ya know?

But anyway, Matt seems like a real weirdo. I mean he kind of gives me the creeps. I'm glad Ivey doesn't like him anymore. But I'm also glad that she found Derek! I CAN NOT wait for him to come into the story. He sounds like a real hoTTie already :D :D

This seems interesting, I'll definately keep reading.
7/2/2007 c1 3Lavi R
Haha...

Ivey seems to be a bit like me...

except I am Facebook obsessed...well i used to be anyway...

now i think i am obsessed with Fictionpress!

lol

But i like this chapter!
7/2/2007 c1 Emily
So this story seems interesting.

Like, the whole myspace thing. I haven't read a story like this yet, so it's a nice change of pace.

So Michelle kind of seems like your over cliched best friend, but that's what makes things interesting, right?

Ivey seems kind of cool, I mean she likes the Yankees! Who doesn't love a good Yankee discussion.

So this is my review for Chapter One, on to Chapter Two!

Love, Emily
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