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6/22/2007 c1 3avidlydreaming
cute poem, sounds fitting for an expecting parent. Although your "stuffed raccoons

and puppies,

teddy bears

and llamas too,

lay about the floor

like the shadows

of heavenly beings

out to lunch." sounds slightly unkind. If I didn't read the rest it would have (because of the time we live in) sound off. A bit like a nightmare as though the stuffed anilmals were sinister,

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