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8/14/2007 c1 55Salkiethia
"I understand."

This is a really nicely written piece - it almost demands a poetic response from the reviewer in reply. You could do that, you know - make a 'response' poem to this one from whoever the speaker was talking to. It would be interesting.

Now, the actual poem. It's got a rocking sort of flow rather than something like iambic pentameter. That's great - free flow/no flow stuff is cool too. Love the little refrain, but I think you cold do without the 'and' part. (Just my opinion.)

Really like it. Great job, all that good stuff.
8/11/2007 c1 15Mist In The Moonlight
I think I understand the meaning of this poem (the question that's asked in the poem, lol) There's lots of pain, hurt, sorrow, and regret in everyone. Such a depressing world.
8/11/2007 c1 6concerto49
I didn't exactly get your point.

I know that it's hard to say you understand since someone will most likely not believe you. You need to earn trust, and all. Hm.

I like the repetition and all, just slightly missed the story.

It was cool anyhow. Cheers.

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