for and tear on6/25/2007 c1 
17Cianna Greenwood
I love the imagery you used in this poem - it really helps to emphasize what you're saying. I also really liked the way you repeated "no" but in a different manner each time. I read several of your other works, and as there were no poem-specific criticisms, I decided to consolidate my praises into this review. You are really a wonderful writer, and there is an edge of cynicism lining each of your poems that I find utterly enticing.
Keep writing.
17Cianna GreenwoodI love the imagery you used in this poem - it really helps to emphasize what you're saying. I also really liked the way you repeated "no" but in a different manner each time. I read several of your other works, and as there were no poem-specific criticisms, I decided to consolidate my praises into this review. You are really a wonderful writer, and there is an edge of cynicism lining each of your poems that I find utterly enticing.
Keep writing.