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7/23/2007 c1 32Serason
"And yet you are the blindest, for you only see what's there."

Oh. I got chills. What it meant to me was that the writer (in this case would be you) is saying that life isn't something that can be seen, but people don't even stop to care to figure out what is it. They are all so busy with their lives that they "see without seeing" or something like that. It was short, but left me wanting more.

I am truly impressed with you.

7/1/2007 c1 20The Wandering Musician
Oh! I love it! I really empathized with this because I feel like so many people don't see that there is more to life than just the surface. It reminds me of something Poe wrote: "Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only at night." This may not be exactly what you had in mind when you wrote it, but I think this is one of those amazing poems that will mean something different to every person who reads it.

Wonderful job! I'm definitely adding it to my favorites list.

Daughter of the Faeries

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