
1/23/2008 c1
14angel-Janna
I like the way you portrayed the Komodo as having a strict honour code to abide my, and the confusion of feeling and memory he experienced as he crawled along to his deadly mission. Creepy- I liked it!
(ps: it's Forward, not foreword... foreword is what you right to introduce your story!)
Keep it up!
Janna X

I like the way you portrayed the Komodo as having a strict honour code to abide my, and the confusion of feeling and memory he experienced as he crawled along to his deadly mission. Creepy- I liked it!
(ps: it's Forward, not foreword... foreword is what you right to introduce your story!)
Keep it up!
Janna X