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1/23/2008 c1 14angel-Janna
I like the way you portrayed the Komodo as having a strict honour code to abide my, and the confusion of feeling and memory he experienced as he crawled along to his deadly mission. Creepy- I liked it!

(ps: it's Forward, not foreword... foreword is what you right to introduce your story!)

Keep it up!

Janna X

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