for You Need Me6/26/2007 c1 
46Yellowierd0
shiny. i like the pattern ness of the poem. structure. yeah. that's the word. and it's so pwetty. i likes..
46Yellowierd0shiny. i like the pattern ness of the poem. structure. yeah. that's the word. and it's so pwetty. i likes..
6/26/2007 c1 332smile for the sunshine
Sane and yet insane. Perfect yet a mess. It's made of love and hate. Beautiful and horrid. Yes, I know him. I know I need him...Yet I'll die with him...Or her. Or whatever it may be. I like this. I understand it. I think that voice is fairly nice when I am alone but not when I am with others...Because it's also the voice of fear and reason...I don't know. I really like your poem though. Excellent for your first. You ought to read my poem called Hope's Shadow. It is written in a similiar style and in a similiar way. But it describes Hope's shadow and not the voice in the back of your head but whatever.
*adds to favs* Keep writing. =]
332smile for the sunshineSane and yet insane. Perfect yet a mess. It's made of love and hate. Beautiful and horrid. Yes, I know him. I know I need him...Yet I'll die with him...Or her. Or whatever it may be. I like this. I understand it. I think that voice is fairly nice when I am alone but not when I am with others...Because it's also the voice of fear and reason...I don't know. I really like your poem though. Excellent for your first. You ought to read my poem called Hope's Shadow. It is written in a similiar style and in a similiar way. But it describes Hope's shadow and not the voice in the back of your head but whatever.
*adds to favs* Keep writing. =]
6/26/2007 c1 Her Wishing Well
Intresting. I especially liked the last line - kinda true really. Great.
Intresting. I especially liked the last line - kinda true really. Great.