for Twins7/31/2008 c1 
24a certain slant of light
Jeez, that girl is me. I really like it, but you could've elaborated it a bit more.
24a certain slant of lightJeez, that girl is me. I really like it, but you could've elaborated it a bit more.
7/15/2007 c1 9Au Printemps
I adore your summary, but the ficlet just doesn't feel true. And in fiction our lies must always be true.
9Au PrintempsI adore your summary, but the ficlet just doesn't feel true. And in fiction our lies must always be true.
6/28/2007 c1 18Sir Scott
That's really some deep thinking going on your head. I would love to see you go with this.
~SirScott
18Sir ScottThat's really some deep thinking going on your head. I would love to see you go with this.
~SirScott
6/28/2007 c1 Mogman
very good, nice details and everything. the part about gods seems a little out of place though
very good, nice details and everything. the part about gods seems a little out of place though
6/28/2007 c1 1illegal.actions
this is good! very good description, though i'm waiting for action if there is supposed to be any!
1illegal.actionsthis is good! very good description, though i'm waiting for action if there is supposed to be any!