for Secrets hidden in silence1/18/2008 c62 Corrupted Lungs
AW!
This was so heartbreaking, I cried when I read [complete]. THANK YOU FOR FINALLY GIVING ME WHAT I'VE WANTED FOR 62 CHAPTERS! lol Oh how I've changed in such a short time in the reading of this story. This story was SO good and it was such a wonderful journey. Thank you so much for writing this! Keep writing please! I want to see a new story! :)
AW!
This was so heartbreaking, I cried when I read [complete]. THANK YOU FOR FINALLY GIVING ME WHAT I'VE WANTED FOR 62 CHAPTERS! lol Oh how I've changed in such a short time in the reading of this story. This story was SO good and it was such a wonderful journey. Thank you so much for writing this! Keep writing please! I want to see a new story! :)
1/18/2008 c62 
6Winter Crusaders
I'm so happy with the way you ended the story I just felt all giddy inside when I finished. And Beau's sister with the bully, that was a shocker. But all in all I loved this enitre story and I am estiatic in reading your future stories.
6Winter CrusadersI'm so happy with the way you ended the story I just felt all giddy inside when I finished. And Beau's sister with the bully, that was a shocker. But all in all I loved this enitre story and I am estiatic in reading your future stories.
1/18/2008 c62 9Ladybugg13
WOW!
That was so good!
Congratulations on finishing such an amazing story!
:D
The ending was so sweet. I love it.
9Ladybugg13WOW!
That was so good!
Congratulations on finishing such an amazing story!
:D
The ending was so sweet. I love it.
1/18/2008 c62 hairy-mushroom-nose
This story is so sweet! I absolutely adore you. It's a wonderful story - and so emotional! I love the end, it's so sweet that he's got that book but he can look at it and feel pain at what is lost but happiness at what he found with Beau and his friends. I like the length - it's a good length in my view. =D
I have recommended it to loads of people and I hope they're reviewing you! I'll look and if they're not I'll kick their asses - you deserve all the review love you can get.
I'm a bit confused about Alex, Laura and Josh's relationship. Oh and now that Alex has had the operation does it mean he'll live a normal live length or not? Sorry - I'm rather ignorant on these matters!
I like how Dimitri thinks of his blood as liquid heat (fire). Also how his views on a relationship with Beau have changed. At first he was really like... No, I shouldn't do this this is wrong etc. (silly boy!) but now he's accepted that he craves Beau and loves him. It's cute!
So, does Beau go to university? Does Layla and Kevin work out? (that's a match I NEVER expected!) Does Kia and Beth marry? 'cos if they do it'd be really weird for Dimitri and Beau... Dimitri is going out with his uncle. heehee.
Anyway, LOVE THE ENDING! I'll read your other stories soon (I'm completely addicted to your style!) and I hope you had a great time writing this story.
Your faithful (if lazy - sorry about that!) reviewer,
hairy-mushroom-nose
This story is so sweet! I absolutely adore you. It's a wonderful story - and so emotional! I love the end, it's so sweet that he's got that book but he can look at it and feel pain at what is lost but happiness at what he found with Beau and his friends. I like the length - it's a good length in my view. =D
I have recommended it to loads of people and I hope they're reviewing you! I'll look and if they're not I'll kick their asses - you deserve all the review love you can get.
I'm a bit confused about Alex, Laura and Josh's relationship. Oh and now that Alex has had the operation does it mean he'll live a normal live length or not? Sorry - I'm rather ignorant on these matters!
I like how Dimitri thinks of his blood as liquid heat (fire). Also how his views on a relationship with Beau have changed. At first he was really like... No, I shouldn't do this this is wrong etc. (silly boy!) but now he's accepted that he craves Beau and loves him. It's cute!
So, does Beau go to university? Does Layla and Kevin work out? (that's a match I NEVER expected!) Does Kia and Beth marry? 'cos if they do it'd be really weird for Dimitri and Beau... Dimitri is going out with his uncle. heehee.
Anyway, LOVE THE ENDING! I'll read your other stories soon (I'm completely addicted to your style!) and I hope you had a great time writing this story.
Your faithful (if lazy - sorry about that!) reviewer,
hairy-mushroom-nose
1/18/2008 c62 1Initially loaded
That was so fucking sweet. I swear, this really is one of my favorite stories on here.
1Initially loadedThat was so fucking sweet. I swear, this really is one of my favorite stories on here.
1/18/2008 c62 Fain Sadi
aw, I'm so sad that this is over. But I'm glad you finally finished it! Hurray for a happy ending! (though I still want a conclusion to the Alex and Josh thing ^_^) Thank you so much for this story.
aw, I'm so sad that this is over. But I'm glad you finally finished it! Hurray for a happy ending! (though I still want a conclusion to the Alex and Josh thing ^_^) Thank you so much for this story.
1/18/2008 c62 5Kathleen Moon
very very sweet...I loved this story. I can't wait to read more of your stories!
5Kathleen Moonvery very sweet...I loved this story. I can't wait to read more of your stories!
1/18/2008 c62 noone2
and so it did end...
this is the perfect ending and the perfect beginning...
thank you so much for this story, kyo, this one will become a treasured - sweet - memory...
THANK YOU!
and so it did end...
this is the perfect ending and the perfect beginning...
thank you so much for this story, kyo, this one will become a treasured - sweet - memory...
THANK YOU!
1/10/2008 c1 1CrayonMentality
So...was Dimitri abused by a murderer?
He's complex and sweet, a really cool character and I can't wait to read the rest. :)
1CrayonMentalitySo...was Dimitri abused by a murderer?
He's complex and sweet, a really cool character and I can't wait to read the rest. :)
12/6/2007 c59 Vicci
Hey!
Sorry I haven't been in touch so long, lots of work and I've only just caught up!
Great chapters. =D I'm glad Dimitri was okay and that his father is locked away now. It's good that in a way Zach is repenting for what he's done. As he said, he can't change or make up for what he's done but he can try.
I was looking forward to the conlcusion of the story but the snippets will be much fun and I'll see if you've got any up now.
I think it's great you're going to correct this to get it published. It's a long story and it'll make a great book.
Hey!
Sorry I haven't been in touch so long, lots of work and I've only just caught up!
Great chapters. =D I'm glad Dimitri was okay and that his father is locked away now. It's good that in a way Zach is repenting for what he's done. As he said, he can't change or make up for what he's done but he can try.
I was looking forward to the conlcusion of the story but the snippets will be much fun and I'll see if you've got any up now.
I think it's great you're going to correct this to get it published. It's a long story and it'll make a great book.
11/30/2007 c61 jjwitdaheydiddydiddy
Sounds like a good plan.
Oman? That's random. Have fun!
Sounds like a good plan.
Oman? That's random. Have fun!
11/29/2007 c61 11My Chemical Music Box
So I'm a little confused. You're gonna put then in a separate thread then add them all onto the end of the story as extra chapters? I like that idea!
And I hope I didn't ofend you. When I said it wasn't worth it. I meant that with a lot of stories it isn't, but with your it would be. I still think it would be annoying though because I'm an imaptient little arse! XD
Have fun in Oman!
11My Chemical Music BoxSo I'm a little confused. You're gonna put then in a separate thread then add them all onto the end of the story as extra chapters? I like that idea!
And I hope I didn't ofend you. When I said it wasn't worth it. I meant that with a lot of stories it isn't, but with your it would be. I still think it would be annoying though because I'm an imaptient little arse! XD
Have fun in Oman!
11/29/2007 c61 4Isidris Gry
Hey, sounds good! Thanks for trying to work this out so it includes everyone's opinion and for letting us know what's up! Good luck with your competion and have fun in Oman (where is it, by the way?) I'm looking forward to the extra's, just a little more than the conclusion because I don't want the story to end. Definitly go for publication! I really hope you can do that, I'd buy your story for sure! It's very good, all around.
4Isidris GryHey, sounds good! Thanks for trying to work this out so it includes everyone's opinion and for letting us know what's up! Good luck with your competion and have fun in Oman (where is it, by the way?) I'm looking forward to the extra's, just a little more than the conclusion because I don't want the story to end. Definitly go for publication! I really hope you can do that, I'd buy your story for sure! It's very good, all around.