for A Talk With Fate1/16/2012 c2 
1NeonTime
It's cute and fun and I liked it. I can't imagine it will continue, but since I think we can all guess at the next part that's acceptable.
1NeonTimeIt's cute and fun and I liked it. I can't imagine it will continue, but since I think we can all guess at the next part that's acceptable.
6/28/2009 c1 KELEVRA
Well, I loved it.
I actually almost choked to death laughing at one point, but I think I'll be okay.
So it would seem that Fate really knows what she's talking about. Perhaps some of us should take her advice to heart.
Don't worry, I feel fine. No lawsuits, I promise.
craM3
Well, I loved it.
I actually almost choked to death laughing at one point, but I think I'll be okay.
So it would seem that Fate really knows what she's talking about. Perhaps some of us should take her advice to heart.
Don't worry, I feel fine. No lawsuits, I promise.
craM3
6/17/2009 c1 1Imparfait Pourtant Parfait
I hate how this story is inconclusive, but, at the same time, I also like it. I really like all of your one-shots, but the one from Neil's POV seemed kind of repetitive because nothing new was really added. I don't feel as if that much of his personality was revealed by adding in this second part. However, I really enjoyed the first part of the story.
You're really good at capturing entire stories in one-shots, so keep on writing!
BTW, I disagree with Emma, yellow is the best color in the rainbow (besides maybe blue :]).
1Imparfait Pourtant ParfaitI hate how this story is inconclusive, but, at the same time, I also like it. I really like all of your one-shots, but the one from Neil's POV seemed kind of repetitive because nothing new was really added. I don't feel as if that much of his personality was revealed by adding in this second part. However, I really enjoyed the first part of the story.
You're really good at capturing entire stories in one-shots, so keep on writing!
BTW, I disagree with Emma, yellow is the best color in the rainbow (besides maybe blue :]).
12/24/2008 c2 13blurrylights
I really loved this! It was really different from other stories, and interesting. The hook ending was a great technique to use, even though I am really curious about what would happen next. Also, the title was really good too..i was expecting something different, but this was surprising in a good way. Nice job. :)
13blurrylightsI really loved this! It was really different from other stories, and interesting. The hook ending was a great technique to use, even though I am really curious about what would happen next. Also, the title was really good too..i was expecting something different, but this was surprising in a good way. Nice job. :)
8/5/2008 c2 2productioncity
aw, thanks for writing back so fast! :)
I read 'A Talk With Fate' about five times
already, I think, and I'm basically
in love with the characters - is that
wierd, since they're fictional? hahaha.
actually, when I said if I knew what
the ending was, it'd be different from
what I expect, I said it because the
story itself was so unpredictable,
that if I assumed something, there
still would be another 99% chance
that the ending I thought it would be
would be wrong. wait, did that make sense?
hahaha! :)
anyways. it's cool to see
a one-shot that had a diffent point of view
from it.. you're really a talented writer!
2productioncityaw, thanks for writing back so fast! :)
I read 'A Talk With Fate' about five times
already, I think, and I'm basically
in love with the characters - is that
wierd, since they're fictional? hahaha.
actually, when I said if I knew what
the ending was, it'd be different from
what I expect, I said it because the
story itself was so unpredictable,
that if I assumed something, there
still would be another 99% chance
that the ending I thought it would be
would be wrong. wait, did that make sense?
hahaha! :)
anyways. it's cool to see
a one-shot that had a diffent point of view
from it.. you're really a talented writer!
8/5/2008 c1 productioncity
great one-shot with a twist!
it's so different from the
happy-ending or the dramatic
finish. although I really want
to know how the story ends,
I think that if I knew, the
story would be different from
what I expected :)
so, kudos to you on this great story,
and keep writing, please! :)
great one-shot with a twist!
it's so different from the
happy-ending or the dramatic
finish. although I really want
to know how the story ends,
I think that if I knew, the
story would be different from
what I expected :)
so, kudos to you on this great story,
and keep writing, please! :)
6/15/2008 c2 7Sub Rosa Vehement
God, I love this story. I read it before, without Neil's POV and it was great. Even better with!
Is that all though? I'd love for them to get together!
7Sub Rosa VehementGod, I love this story. I read it before, without Neil's POV and it was great. Even better with!
Is that all though? I'd love for them to get together!
6/14/2008 c2 8duckliy543
how does he feel
its like there's no emotion he notices but he doesnt do anything about it! aga! but i lvoe it!
8duckliy543how does he feel
its like there's no emotion he notices but he doesnt do anything about it! aga! but i lvoe it!
4/21/2008 c1 5HelloLovely
Uhm, I was just wondering if there was anything else with this story cause it was just sort of left hanging. Not even a hint of what might happen. At all.
5HelloLovelyUhm, I was just wondering if there was anything else with this story cause it was just sort of left hanging. Not even a hint of what might happen. At all.
12/22/2007 c1 xbrunnettex0
okay i just read "a talk with fate" and WHATS WITH THE ENDING. lol like i read it and i get to the ending and im like maybe theres another chapter.. and THERE IS NONE. WHAT HAPPENS.. he doesnt feel the same way?
okay i just read "a talk with fate" and WHATS WITH THE ENDING. lol like i read it and i get to the ending and im like maybe theres another chapter.. and THERE IS NONE. WHAT HAPPENS.. he doesnt feel the same way?
8/14/2007 c1 jaded.darling
i enjoyed this story a lot but i can't believe we were left not knowing what happened. my face completely dropped at the end as if i just found out my dog got hit by a car. well not quite as bad, but u get the picture. so please, please i hope this isn't the end of the story!
i enjoyed this story a lot but i can't believe we were left not knowing what happened. my face completely dropped at the end as if i just found out my dog got hit by a car. well not quite as bad, but u get the picture. so please, please i hope this isn't the end of the story!
6/27/2007 c1 8duckliy543
wow this is soo good.
but it leaves me with alott of questionss
i love oneshots like this
keep up the good work.
8duckliy543wow this is soo good.
but it leaves me with alott of questionss
i love oneshots like this
keep up the good work.
6/27/2007 c1 2Make Love Not War
Wonderfully written. That had better not be the end of it, or I'll have to... do something drastic. xD Seriously though. I HAVE. TO KNOW.
:D
2Make Love Not WarWonderfully written. That had better not be the end of it, or I'll have to... do something drastic. xD Seriously though. I HAVE. TO KNOW.
:D