for But I Love You7/6/2007 c21 
1TheQuilAndInk
aww n fairy tale ending please make a sequel
Anyways your writing is still really awesomw
great job :-)
1TheQuilAndInkaww n fairy tale ending please make a sequel
Anyways your writing is still really awesomw
great job :-)
7/6/2007 c20 1claretmadeira
Dude. Check. Your. Grammar. It's getting kinda annoying reading, "threw his hair" instead of "through his hair" and "I got dress" instead of "I got dressed." And watch your puntuaction.
1claretmadeiraDude. Check. Your. Grammar. It's getting kinda annoying reading, "threw his hair" instead of "through his hair" and "I got dress" instead of "I got dressed." And watch your puntuaction.
7/6/2007 c20 1TheQuilAndInk
Whoah i thought it was going to be trent waiting there not colby anyways i love jonathon he so sweet and i'm glad that ally is getting over trent
yay this was a really great chapter please update as soon as possible thanks :-)
1TheQuilAndInkWhoah i thought it was going to be trent waiting there not colby anyways i love jonathon he so sweet and i'm glad that ally is getting over trent
yay this was a really great chapter please update as soon as possible thanks :-)
7/6/2007 c20 2Miraculous.Science
I dont think she should be with either Trent or Colby, even if Colby has a good reason for leaving. She's grown up and they were stupid to play her.
cant wait for an update!
2Miraculous.ScienceI dont think she should be with either Trent or Colby, even if Colby has a good reason for leaving. She's grown up and they were stupid to play her.
cant wait for an update!
7/6/2007 c19 Ice and Snow
no...a cliffhanger! It's the climax! The turning point!
...COME BACK
Continue soon.
no...a cliffhanger! It's the climax! The turning point!
...COME BACK
Continue soon.
7/6/2007 c19 ayoo marie
Ok, first Colby leaves Ally with out any notice. Then she finds out that Trent loves her only to find out that he doesnt love her like that.
Ally's life is really messed up now.
I feel so much pain and sympathy for her.
Hopefully she will be able to forget about Trent & Colby and have the kick ass life that she deserves to have.
Ok, first Colby leaves Ally with out any notice. Then she finds out that Trent loves her only to find out that he doesnt love her like that.
Ally's life is really messed up now.
I feel so much pain and sympathy for her.
Hopefully she will be able to forget about Trent & Colby and have the kick ass life that she deserves to have.
7/6/2007 c19 1TheQuilAndInk
Aw dang it i thought he really loved her like that that's so sad well she really needs to move on now
I can't wait to see what happens next
1TheQuilAndInkAw dang it i thought he really loved her like that that's so sad well she really needs to move on now
I can't wait to see what happens next
7/6/2007 c19 2Miraculous.Science
NO! THE WHOLE WORLD IS AGAINST HER! I WANTED TO CRY WHEN I READ THIS! I HATE TRENT! I NEVER THOUGHT I'D SAY THAT! HE SUCKS! HE HURT HER SO BAD! BUTTHEAD! I HATE HIM! I WANT TO CRY!
OH HOW MUCH I LOATH HIM! OH SAD! UPDATE SOON!
2Miraculous.ScienceNO! THE WHOLE WORLD IS AGAINST HER! I WANTED TO CRY WHEN I READ THIS! I HATE TRENT! I NEVER THOUGHT I'D SAY THAT! HE SUCKS! HE HURT HER SO BAD! BUTTHEAD! I HATE HIM! I WANT TO CRY!
OH HOW MUCH I LOATH HIM! OH SAD! UPDATE SOON!
7/6/2007 c19 4vIE-TeNDRe
omg this story is getting better and better! i can't wait until the next chapter! so i'm mad at trent...how could he do that to her? ugh and why would he want to stay with holly? geeze and whats going on with colby? he just like decided to leave her? ...sorry i'm like so into your story :P keep updating!:)
4vIE-TeNDReomg this story is getting better and better! i can't wait until the next chapter! so i'm mad at trent...how could he do that to her? ugh and why would he want to stay with holly? geeze and whats going on with colby? he just like decided to leave her? ...sorry i'm like so into your story :P keep updating!:)
7/6/2007 c19 13Eviline
Wow... that was a smack on her face... she got her hopes up for nothing... jez I cried like a baby.
13EvilineWow... that was a smack on her face... she got her hopes up for nothing... jez I cried like a baby.
7/6/2007 c18 Nessya
I love your story, it made me cry in some parts, couldn't help it. Just don't leave us haging by scuriosity, update soon.
**Kisses Nessya
I love your story, it made me cry in some parts, couldn't help it. Just don't leave us haging by scuriosity, update soon.
**Kisses Nessya
7/6/2007 c18 kera
your story made me cry 4 times. no story has ever made me do that so i love it your doing a great job. plus i can relate :) thanks for writing it i can't wait tell the next one to come out! :)
your story made me cry 4 times. no story has ever made me do that so i love it your doing a great job. plus i can relate :) thanks for writing it i can't wait tell the next one to come out! :)