7/4/2007 c15 melissa
omg! i cant believe the last line. that is one awesome way to end aa chapter. first i was thinking omg yes, but then i thoughtthat it might just be trent loving ally like a sister again. and that was when he was a child, so maybe his feeling changed. and i really wish ally would get over trent because olby actually genuinely likes her. and its probably around the same feelings she had for trent. but it always sounds easier to do something like gettin over someone u like than actually doing it. so please update the new chapter, but ure pretty good at that anyway.
omg! i cant believe the last line. that is one awesome way to end aa chapter. first i was thinking omg yes, but then i thoughtthat it might just be trent loving ally like a sister again. and that was when he was a child, so maybe his feeling changed. and i really wish ally would get over trent because olby actually genuinely likes her. and its probably around the same feelings she had for trent. but it always sounds easier to do something like gettin over someone u like than actually doing it. so please update the new chapter, but ure pretty good at that anyway.
7/4/2007 c15 1TheQuilAndInk
aw first i was happy that she was going to forget about trent but now i'm sad because he does love her dang i hope colby tells her what he saw aww that's so sad
Great chapter
please update as soon as possible
can't wait :-)
aw first i was happy that she was going to forget about trent but now i'm sad because he does love her dang i hope colby tells her what he saw aww that's so sad
Great chapter
please update as soon as possible
can't wait :-)
7/4/2007 c15 punkr0ckchck
are you serious! omg lol props for that ending to that chapter
are you serious! omg lol props for that ending to that chapter
7/4/2007 c15 IzzahDaviz
hey, u have a really nice story going on.. seriously..
but there are a few grammatical errors.. lol!
cant wait for the next chapter..
by the way, are u a girl or a guy cuz the way you write kinda look like girls writing.. lol!
hey, u have a really nice story going on.. seriously..
but there are a few grammatical errors.. lol!
cant wait for the next chapter..
by the way, are u a girl or a guy cuz the way you write kinda look like girls writing.. lol!
7/3/2007 c15 2Miraculous.Science
AW! THATS SO SWEET!
And trent loved her too! Aww! Is that the end? or do you have another surprising twist in store.
trent did play her, the butt! but i still feel attached to him in someway. i feel like Ally, torn in two.
:)
AW! THATS SO SWEET!
And trent loved her too! Aww! Is that the end? or do you have another surprising twist in store.
trent did play her, the butt! but i still feel attached to him in someway. i feel like Ally, torn in two.
:)
7/3/2007 c6 8drakunshanks
Your the only other person on the planet that I know of that actually listens to Metric. You get major brownie points for that one!
Your the only other person on the planet that I know of that actually listens to Metric. You get major brownie points for that one!
7/3/2007 c14 4taliana raine
OMG! i've read soo many stories on here & they were all really good but i think that this one is the best one so far! it's so good i just couldn't stop reading it! KEEP WRITING!
OMG! i've read soo many stories on here & they were all really good but i think that this one is the best one so far! it's so good i just couldn't stop reading it! KEEP WRITING!
7/3/2007 c14 Psycho's Angel
i love the story that fucking stupid he's still seeing the hoe who made him lose his best friend like it was nothing what an ass poor ally i hope things get better for her
i love the story that fucking stupid he's still seeing the hoe who made him lose his best friend like it was nothing what an ass poor ally i hope things get better for her
7/2/2007 c14 2Miraculous.Science
Sorry i havent been reviewing(though you prolly havent noticed) but i've been really lazy lately. Its a problem i have, a disease really. *sighs dramatically* its just so hard sometimes! *sobs once again dramatically* *gets over it*
anyway...its really good. i feel so bad for ally. i wonder what will happen when trent finds the letter. oh! and i'm pretty sure how it will turn out since you only have pics of two of them. i'm quite happy with it! but that might not be what you had in mind, BUT I THINK ITS PERFECT! i'm weird...update soon!
Sorry i havent been reviewing(though you prolly havent noticed) but i've been really lazy lately. Its a problem i have, a disease really. *sighs dramatically* its just so hard sometimes! *sobs once again dramatically* *gets over it*
anyway...its really good. i feel so bad for ally. i wonder what will happen when trent finds the letter. oh! and i'm pretty sure how it will turn out since you only have pics of two of them. i'm quite happy with it! but that might not be what you had in mind, BUT I THINK ITS PERFECT! i'm weird...update soon!
7/2/2007 c14 3Pereo Angelus
Very good chapter. I feel bad for Colby,but he's the one that started things with Julie.
Very good chapter. I feel bad for Colby,but he's the one that started things with Julie.