
7/16/2007 c1 jojoba-music-girl
Wow...I'm just...wow..
Sorry, I don't know what to say except: this is really amazing! I couldn't breathe for a while, while reading this. Definetely my favourite!
[jojoba-music-girl]
Wow...I'm just...wow..
Sorry, I don't know what to say except: this is really amazing! I couldn't breathe for a while, while reading this. Definetely my favourite!
[jojoba-music-girl]
6/28/2007 c1 bipedalcooney
This is absolutely beautiful! The imagery here is stunning, I love it! Great work here, and keep writing!
This is absolutely beautiful! The imagery here is stunning, I love it! Great work here, and keep writing!
6/28/2007 c1
38CarpeDiem28
i like this poem and the way you have exhibited your feelings. it is very simple and beautiful. keep writing!

i like this poem and the way you have exhibited your feelings. it is very simple and beautiful. keep writing!
6/27/2007 c1
9PessimisticOptimism
I love how this poem is so mysterious yet mysitcal. The first two lines had me hooked. From reading this poem alone, I can tell that you have a rare talent. Don't ever let anyone tell you you can't write!

I love how this poem is so mysterious yet mysitcal. The first two lines had me hooked. From reading this poem alone, I can tell that you have a rare talent. Don't ever let anyone tell you you can't write!