
7/7/2007 c1
21as beauty dies
This is really cute so far! I love the pacing and the character's interaction; it really opens to an interesting start and just-
Yeah, I'm really digging this whole set-up. It's simply amazing.
Well done. ^_^
- Noelle

This is really cute so far! I love the pacing and the character's interaction; it really opens to an interesting start and just-
Yeah, I'm really digging this whole set-up. It's simply amazing.
Well done. ^_^
- Noelle
6/30/2007 c2 A Sophisticated Legacy
Aw, that's the end! I loved it, it was very sweet and detailed. :)
Aw, that's the end! I loved it, it was very sweet and detailed. :)
6/28/2007 c1
2euphorictragedy
This has potential but I saw some spelling and grammatical errors. I noticed a few run-on sentences and others were a little confusing. However, I am looking forward to the next chapter:)

This has potential but I saw some spelling and grammatical errors. I noticed a few run-on sentences and others were a little confusing. However, I am looking forward to the next chapter:)