Just In
for Our Right

6/28/2007 c1 134whispered something profound
i liked your poem. it would be much easier to read, though, if you didn't center it. that makes it easy to get distracted from what you're saying because the lines don't start the same distance from the edge of the page. you're a good poet, but it's hard to tell with the format you put the poem in. hope this helps (or not, whatever)

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