8/15/2008 c22 7g.na
WAH! you killed her! so sad
but it was really sweet...
in my opinion=i don't like how sad endings end the story
BUT it was really well-written
it was awesome
btw, that Edward is a real asshole
i feel so sorry for Emma :(
WAH! you killed her! so sad
but it was really sweet...
in my opinion=i don't like how sad endings end the story
BUT it was really well-written
it was awesome
btw, that Edward is a real asshole
i feel so sorry for Emma :(
4/5/2008 c22 1XxTheSoNotMainStreamxX
OH MY FRIGGEN GOTH!
That's so sad!
She DIED!
I can't believe u killed her.
I LOVED THIS STORY!1
IT'S MY FAV ON HERE!
I Feel sorta hate-ful to Edward though.
God he can be a bastard!
OH MY FRIGGEN GOTH!
That's so sad!
She DIED!
I can't believe u killed her.
I LOVED THIS STORY!1
IT'S MY FAV ON HERE!
I Feel sorta hate-ful to Edward though.
God he can be a bastard!
11/15/2007 c22 Elizabeth07
I liked the story, but, had a few complaints.. Just little ones.. Your misspellings sometimes made it hard for me to read... But, otherwise, I loved it alot!.. I also wondered about the character, Lucas, Edward had said in his mind that Lucas saw Emma as more than a friend.. But, you never clarified later whether he ever did.. I thought at one time that maybe Emma would chose neither brother and go for Lucas instead, because he seemed level headed and genuinely cared for her. Anywho.. Thanks for hearing me ramble.
I liked the story, but, had a few complaints.. Just little ones.. Your misspellings sometimes made it hard for me to read... But, otherwise, I loved it alot!.. I also wondered about the character, Lucas, Edward had said in his mind that Lucas saw Emma as more than a friend.. But, you never clarified later whether he ever did.. I thought at one time that maybe Emma would chose neither brother and go for Lucas instead, because he seemed level headed and genuinely cared for her. Anywho.. Thanks for hearing me ramble.
11/3/2007 c22 1blackcloud1986
OMG that was so sad i cryed i felt my hart breake but it was really really good
OMG that was so sad i cryed i felt my hart breake but it was really really good
10/30/2007 c22 18pinkfluffyoranges
Wow this story was deep, real deep. I thought it would be a lighthearted bit of fluff, boy was I wrong. But it was an amazing read, and I'm glad I stumbled upon it. You did a brilliant job, and I hope to read more from you in the future.
Wow this story was deep, real deep. I thought it would be a lighthearted bit of fluff, boy was I wrong. But it was an amazing read, and I'm glad I stumbled upon it. You did a brilliant job, and I hope to read more from you in the future.
9/30/2007 c22 2Sarah-Ray
This story actually made me cry..
It's fantastic. I can't even describe it.
WooW.
You're an awesome writer.
You and your story should go on my favorite.
This story actually made me cry..
It's fantastic. I can't even describe it.
WooW.
You're an awesome writer.
You and your story should go on my favorite.
9/10/2007 c22 1TheQuilAndInk
Holy crap i'm crying right now because that was so emotional
I wasn't expecting that wow wow wow
oh my that was so sad
it was truly amazing great job
:]
Holy crap i'm crying right now because that was so emotional
I wasn't expecting that wow wow wow
oh my that was so sad
it was truly amazing great job
:]
9/9/2007 c22 Catherine
AH no i didnt want emma to die...so sad -cries like a maniac- =(
AH no i didnt want emma to die...so sad -cries like a maniac- =(
9/9/2007 c22 14Halani
Oh my gosh! That was soo sad! The ending was great, but still sad where she died. . . Wow is all I can say. Congrats on a great story filled with much emotion.
Oh my gosh! That was soo sad! The ending was great, but still sad where she died. . . Wow is all I can say. Congrats on a great story filled with much emotion.
8/23/2007 c21 1TheQuilAndInk
wow Congrats on finishing the story it was Awesome
totally amazing sad, captivating, happy, emotions all over the place, real good stuff :]
So i'm guessing you might be making another story with edward's life because he left or continue this story because it had a great ending hah she's a blond but i feel like you could definitely continue if you want to just a thought:]
Anyways great job
can't to read your new stuff
wow Congrats on finishing the story it was Awesome
totally amazing sad, captivating, happy, emotions all over the place, real good stuff :]
So i'm guessing you might be making another story with edward's life because he left or continue this story because it had a great ending hah she's a blond but i feel like you could definitely continue if you want to just a thought:]
Anyways great job
can't to read your new stuff
8/22/2007 c21 14Halani
Aww what a good ending!
Although I kind of feel bad about Edward finding Emma in that situation...
BUT, I feel happy about Emma and Evan! =D Awesome, awesome awesome!
You did a really great job and deserve a round of applause *sounds of applause* Congrats! Ooh, now I may read some of your other stories... I dunno, maybe! Anyway, Congrats on the big finale!
=D Halani
Aww what a good ending!
Although I kind of feel bad about Edward finding Emma in that situation...
BUT, I feel happy about Emma and Evan! =D Awesome, awesome awesome!
You did a really great job and deserve a round of applause *sounds of applause* Congrats! Ooh, now I may read some of your other stories... I dunno, maybe! Anyway, Congrats on the big finale!
=D Halani
8/22/2007 c21 SuperCUTEJensen
yay they finally got toehter...I'm happy...your story is great...i love it
yay they finally got toehter...I'm happy...your story is great...i love it
8/20/2007 c20 1TheQuilAndInk
wow wow wow this chapter is amazing so deep
wow
I really hope she decides to be with evan she loved him all along please update soon dang those cliff hangars :]
wow wow wow this chapter is amazing so deep
wow
I really hope she decides to be with evan she loved him all along please update soon dang those cliff hangars :]
8/19/2007 c20 SuperCUTEJensen
poor emma..i hope she pick Evan..I dont like Edward he's jerk..I want to see Emma and Evan get together in the end
poor emma..i hope she pick Evan..I dont like Edward he's jerk..I want to see Emma and Evan get together in the end