
3/9/2009 c21
5Fatal Apex
Absolutely amazing story. Great job. It was written fabulously. You're a very good writer. I couldn't stop reading it. I do think you should've described things a little more however (looks, how people saw others as etc.), but apart from that, it was great. Congrats on an excellent ending. I loved it. :)
PS: I'm wondering what the sequel would be about? Would it continue Jake and Hannah's story?

Absolutely amazing story. Great job. It was written fabulously. You're a very good writer. I couldn't stop reading it. I do think you should've described things a little more however (looks, how people saw others as etc.), but apart from that, it was great. Congrats on an excellent ending. I loved it. :)
PS: I'm wondering what the sequel would be about? Would it continue Jake and Hannah's story?
3/1/2009 c21
5Fayre Meira
you have a way with words and characters that make oh oh so jealous,,hahahaha :) thanks for writing this. I thoroughly enjoyed it!

you have a way with words and characters that make oh oh so jealous,,hahahaha :) thanks for writing this. I thoroughly enjoyed it!
2/28/2009 c21
11Sakiru Yume
This was a great story. I really liked it. I have to admit, I almost started crying at the scene with their fight. This was definitely a really good story. Nice job.

This was a great story. I really liked it. I have to admit, I almost started crying at the scene with their fight. This was definitely a really good story. Nice job.
2/20/2009 c20
9Manga Girl Lover
I almost forgot to say! There was one thing that made me kinda like "hm". How come all the character's were always surprised by the way Hannah acted after she had amnesia? 'cause after all she didn't remember anything so why would she still have those same types of traits in her personality that they (her friends) kept expecting? But other then that... you did play this story out very well and like I said before... I loved it! :D

I almost forgot to say! There was one thing that made me kinda like "hm". How come all the character's were always surprised by the way Hannah acted after she had amnesia? 'cause after all she didn't remember anything so why would she still have those same types of traits in her personality that they (her friends) kept expecting? But other then that... you did play this story out very well and like I said before... I loved it! :D
2/20/2009 c21 Manga Girl Lover
aw this was so good! I definitely like the pair! And I'm so glad that they finally got together! Though I was hoping to see more gushiness before it ended... lol it was still really good!
aw this was so good! I definitely like the pair! And I'm so glad that they finally got together! Though I was hoping to see more gushiness before it ended... lol it was still really good!